🔥Phân tích "The news about violent crimes may frighten people or, on contrary, encourage them to commit a crime. Therefore, some believe that these types of news should not be reported in newspapers or on TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề máy 2/2/2025) - Bài mẫu, kèm dịch & giải thích từ vựng & cấu trúc grammar khó

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI TASK 1 VIẾT THƯ NGÀY 05/7/2020"you are going to take a holiday and your friend agrees to stay at your house. Write a letter to him for"IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa HS đạt 6.0 đi thi thật), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The news about violent crimes may frighten people or, on contrary, encourage them to commit a crime. Therefore, some believe that these types of news should not be reported in newspapers or on TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

The news about violent crimes may frighten people or, on contrary, encourage them to commit a crime. Therefore, some believe that these types of news should not be reported in newspapers or on TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Constant exposure to such news can lead to heightened fear and anxiety among the public.
    • Supporting idea: Individuals, particularly children and vulnerable populations, might develop an exaggerated perception of crime rates and personal safety concerns, impacting their overall well-being and sense of security.
    • Example: In the United States, a study by the Pew Research Center found that 63% of Americans say that they are often or sometimes feeling stressed about the news they see. The study also found that 42% of Americans say that the news makes them feel anxious.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: It encourages viewers to violate the laws (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: those criminal descriptions wield adverse influence on audience, especially fragile youngsters)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Numerous teenagers tend to follow or replicate infractions presented with detailed procedures, methods and tools mainly because they have great curiosity or they want to make a grand impression by proving that they can be better than the person who committed the original crime. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "procedure" tiếng anh
        • Due to vulnerable mentality and lack of ample experience, upon contacting violent programmes, those kids are tempted to follow suit, thus breaking the law and such juvenile delinquencies are too often to be ignored. 
        • If this trend is out of control, then more teenagers will fall victim to those evil reports.
      • Example: In the United States, there have been several cases of teenagers replicating school shootings after being exposed to detailed information about the shootings online. For example, in 2018, a 17-year-old boy in Florida was arrested for plotting to shoot up his school after he had been watching videos of other school shootings online.

• • • Main idea: Numerous would-be criminals can learn skills of committing crimes from similar cases, also the police find it more formidable to crack down on crimes efficiently.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Although the original purpose of crime description is to warn people against offenses and teach them valuable lessons, the fact is that there, indeed, exists a discrepancy between what is desired and what is achieved. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "indeed" 
      • Example: In the Philippines, there has been a recent upsurge in the number of carjacking cases. Police believe that this is due to the fact that criminals are learning from each other and sharing information about how to commit these crimes.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The prevalence of news about heinous crimes (tội ác ghê tởm – extremely wicked or shocking crimes) in the media has sparked concerns about its ramifications. I totally agree that such news should not be broadcast or published, as it instills paralyzing fear (nỗi sợ tê liệt – an overwhelming and immobilizing fear) in the public and inadvertently breeds lawbreakers (nuôi dưỡng tội phạm – encourages the emergence of criminals).

The first reason is that constant exposure to violent news can result in heightened paranoia (sự hoang tưởng gia tăng – excessive fear or suspicion), which severely affects people’s mental well-being. Individuals, especially children and the impressionable masses (những người dễ bị ảnh hưởng – groups of people who are highly susceptible to external influence), may develop an exaggerated perception (nhận thức cường điệu – an overestimated or distorted view) of crime rates, leading to deteriorating mental resilience (sự suy giảm khả năng chống chịu về tinh thần – declining ability to cope with stress). For instance, a study by the Pew Research Center found that 63% of Americans frequently experience stress due to crime-related news, while 42% report that such content induces anxiety. The media-induced hysteria (sự hoảng loạn do truyền thông gây ra – collective panic resulting from media influence) not only undermines people’s confidence in public safety but also discourages them from engaging in daily activities.

Moreover, broadcasting detailed accounts of crimes can act as a criminal blueprint (bản thiết kế tội phạm – a step-by-step guide for committing offenses) for potential offenders. Impressionable juveniles (những thanh thiếu niên dễ bị ảnh hưởng – young individuals who are highly susceptible to external influence), driven by curiosity or the desire for notoriety, might attempt to replicate offenses (tái hiện hành vi phạm tội – imitate criminal acts). For example, in the United States, there have been cases of teenagers plotting school shootings after being exposed to extensive media coverage of similar incidents. Furthermore, such sensationalized depictions (miêu tả giật gân – exaggerated or dramatic portrayals) not only glamorize crime but also make it more formidable for law enforcement to curb felonies (khó khăn hơn cho cảnh sát trong việc ngăn chặn trọng tội – increasingly challenging for authorities to control major crimes). As a result, crime rates may surge uncontrollably (tăng vọt không thể kiểm soát – rise drastically without restraint), exacerbating social instability.

In conclusion, the proliferation of crime-related news in the media exacerbates public distress and serves as a guide for prospective criminals. Thus, restricting its exposure is imperative to maintaining societal security.

New Vocabulary

1. Heinous crimes (tội ác ghê tởm) – extremely wicked or shocking crimes

   • Synonyms: atrocious crimes, egregious offenses, abhorrent acts
   • Antonyms: minor infractions, petty offenses, trivial misconduct
   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The prevalence of news about heinous crimes in the media has sparked concerns about its ramifications.

2. Paralyzing fear (nỗi sợ tê liệt) – an overwhelming and immobilizing fear

   • Synonyms: crippling anxiety, debilitating dread, overwhelming terror
   • Antonyms: calm confidence, unwavering courage, inner peace
   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Such news instills paralyzing fear in the public.

3. Breeds lawbreakers (nuôi dưỡng tội phạm) – encourages the emergence of criminals

   • Synonyms: fosters criminals, cultivates offenders, nurtures delinquents
   • Antonyms: deters crime, discourages wrongdoing, prevents offenses
   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: It inadvertently breeds lawbreakers by exposing them to crime tactics.

4. Heightened paranoia (sự hoang tưởng gia tăng) – excessive fear or suspicion

5. Impressionable masses (những người dễ bị ảnh hưởng) – groups of people who are highly susceptible to external influence

6. Exaggerated perception (nhận thức cường điệu) – an overestimated or distorted view

7. Deteriorating mental resilience (sự suy giảm khả năng chống chịu về tinh thần) – declining ability to cope with stress

8. Media-induced hysteria (sự hoảng loạn do truyền thông gây ra) – collective panic resulting from media influence

9. Criminal blueprint (bản thiết kế tội phạm) – a step-by-step guide for committing offenses

10. Impressionable juveniles (những thanh thiếu niên dễ bị ảnh hưởng) – young individuals who are highly susceptible to external influence

11. Replicate offenses (tái hiện hành vi phạm tội) – imitate criminal acts

12. Sensationalized depictions (miêu tả giật gân) – exaggerated or dramatic portrayals

13. More formidable for law enforcement to curb felonies (khó khăn hơn cho cảnh sát trong việc ngăn chặn trọng tội) – increasingly challenging for authorities to control major crimes

14. Surge uncontrollably (tăng vọt không thể kiểm soát) – rise drastically without restraint

Difficult Grammar Structures

1. Inversion with negative adverbs

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Not only does crime-related news heighten public anxiety, but it also provides criminals with a guide for their actions.
   • Không những tin tức về tội phạm làm tăng lo lắng trong cộng đồng, mà nó còn cung cấp hướng dẫn cho tội phạm.

2. Cleft sentences for emphasis

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: It is the sensationalized depictions of crimes that make it more formidable for law enforcement to curb felonies.
   • Chính những mô tả giật gân về tội phạm đã khiến cảnh sát khó khăn hơn trong việc ngăn chặn trọng tội.

3. Relative clauses for additional information

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Individuals, especially children and the impressionable masses, who are frequently exposed to such news, may develop an exaggerated perception of crime rates.
   • Những cá nhân, đặc biệt là trẻ em và nhóm dễ bị ảnh hưởng, nếu thường xuyên tiếp xúc với những tin tức này, có thể phát triển nhận thức cường điệu về tỷ lệ tội phạm.

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