Phân tích "The maps show the changes of Shalton village from 1910 to 2010" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi 7/6/2022)

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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The maps show the changes of Shalton village from 1910 to 2010" IELTS WRITING TASK 1.

I. Đề bài

The maps show the changes of Shalton village from 1910 to 2010

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Hoặc hình này sẽ rõ hơn

The maps show the changes of Shalton village from 1910 to 2010

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

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    • Overall:
      • The maps show that Shalton village has undergone significant changes over the course of a century. 
      • The village in 2010 became more structured and organized, with new housing developments and improved road networks. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: by 2010, the village had expanded significantly, with many new roads, buildings and housing developments)
    • Body 1: Viết về map 1
      • The 1910 map provides a glimpse into the village's simpler and more rural past, with a cluster of buildings situated near the center of the map. (nêu tên các buildings ở giữa) (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The map from 1910 shows a small, compact village with a few scattered houses and roads HOẶC: The village is centered around a green space and is composed of a tight-knit community of buildings)
    • Body 2: Viết về map 2
      • In 2010, new housing developments were constructed to the north and east of the village, almost doubling its number in 1910.
      • The main road was rerouted, bypassing the village center, which reduced the amount of traffic passing through the village. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ"reduce"tiếng anh 
      • .....

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The maps illustrate the transformation of Shalton village between 1910 and 2010.

Shalton village has undergone significant changes over the century. By 2010, the village had expanded considerably, featuring many new roads, buildings, and housing developments.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

In 1910, the village was small and rural, with a cluster of buildings around a central green space. The map shows a compact community with a few scattered houses and simple road networks, highlighting its simpler past.

By 2010, the village had experienced substantial development. New housing developments were constructed to the north and east, nearly doubling the number of houses from 1910. Additionally, the main road was rerouted to bypass the village center, significantly reducing traffic through the core area. This improvement in infrastructure made the village more organized and structured.

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