Phân tích"The maps show the changes made to a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010."IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 24/3/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The maps show the changes made to a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010."IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi IELTS 24/3/2023)

The maps show the changes made to a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010.

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  • Overall:
    • The museum area had not undergone many dramatic changes.
    • There were significant alterations to the surrounding area to allow for greater access and leisure.
  • Body 1: Viết về map 1
    • Internally, the museum in 1990 contained a restaurant in the top left corner, various exhibition spaces on all sides, and a small shop in the bottom right. 
    • In 1990, there was a large garden to the left of the museum and the car park was located opposite the garden >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "opposite" tiếng anh
  • Body 2: Viết về map 2
    • By 2010, the only modification was that the shop was extended towards the left at the expense of the adjacent exhibition room >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "towards" tiếng anh
    • Outside the main structure, the largest single change was the expansion of the car park on the right side which subsumed a garden beneath it. 
    • The final difference was the cottage in the bottom left corner across from the museum was renovated to become a cafe.
    • The paths and roads as well as the garden above the car park were unchanged. 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The maps illustrate the changes made to a small museum and its surroundings between 1990 and 2010.

Overall, while the museum itself underwent minimal internal alterations, the surrounding area experienced significant modifications aimed at enhancing accessibility and leisure.

In 1990, the museum housed a restaurant in the top left corner, exhibition spaces on all sides, and a small shop in the bottom right. Externally, a large garden was situated to the left of the museum, and a car park was positioned directly opposite the garden.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

By 2010, the shop had been expanded leftward, encroaching upon an adjacent exhibition room, marking the only internal change. Externally, the most notable alteration was the car park’s expansion, which absorbed the garden. Additionally, the cottage across from the museum was converted into a café. However, the paths, roads, and the garden above the car park remained unchanged.

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