Bên cạnh Bài sửa đề thi IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ngày 22/8/2020 của HS đi thi đạt 7.0, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The maps show a present layout of an office building and plans for its future redevelopment" IELTS WRITING TASK 1
I. Đề bài
The maps show a present layout of an office building and plans for its future redevelopment
II. Phân tích
1. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách viết dạng MAP IELTS WRITING TASK 1
2. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
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- Overall: offices will be larger and more spacious while certain areas, such as the kitchen and green spaces will be removed. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase từ "spacious" (Diễn đạt "rộng rãi" tiếng anh)
- Body 1: Viết về map 1
- At present, there are two entrances: one in the middle of the western side of the building and another at the end of the southern side. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "side" tiếng anh
- The four offices currently sit between the two entrances while the toilet is situated opposite to both.
- On both the east and west side of the building are green spaces with grass.
- Body 2: Viết về map 2
- In the future, the southern entrance is expected to be moved to the centre of the side.
- The office spaces will be enlarged, and two of them are to be situated on the opposite side of where they were, replacing the kitchen and canteen. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase từ situated/located
- The green spaces are also expected to be removed.
- On the right of the building, it will be replaced with a meeting area at the bottom and a toilet at the top.
- There is going to be a new coffee machine next to the storeroom, whose position remains unchanged.
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The maps illustrate the current layout of an office building and plans for its future redevelopment.
Overall, the office spaces will be expanded and more spacious, while certain areas, such as the kitchen and green spaces, will be removed.
Body 1: At present, there are two entrances: one in the middle of the western side of the building and another at the end of the southern side. The four offices are positioned between the two entrances, while the toilet is located opposite to both. On both the east and west sides of the building are green spaces with grass.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
Body 2: In the future, the southern entrance is expected to be moved to the centre of the side. The office spaces will be enlarged, and two of them will be relocated to the opposite side, replacing the kitchen and canteen. The green spaces are also expected to be removed. On the right of the building, it will be replaced with a meeting area at the bottom and a toilet at the top. There will be a new coffee machine next to the storeroom, which remains in its current location.
New Vocabulary:
Redevelopment (phát triển lại): Refers to the process of making changes to an area or structure, often to improve it.
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The redevelopment of the old factory will bring new businesses to the area.
Overall (tổng thể): A general summary or view of a situation or plan.
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Overall, the building plans look promising and will provide better facilities.
Expanded (mở rộng): Made larger or more extensive.
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The company plans to expand its offices to accommodate more staff.
Spacious (rộng rãi): Having plenty of room; large.
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The new office will be more spacious, offering more comfort to employees.
Removed (bị loại bỏ): Taken away or discarded.
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The old equipment will be removed to make space for new machines.
Positioned (được đặt ở vị trí): Refers to the specific place or arrangement of something.
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The desks are positioned along the wall to maximize space.
Located (nằm ở): Refers to where something is situated.
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The storage room is located on the ground floor.
Side (mặt, bên): A particular part or surface of something.
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The meeting room is located on the south side of the building.
Relocated (di dời): Moved from one place to another.
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The office printer was relocated to a more convenient area.
Current location (vị trí hiện tại): The present place where something is situated.
- IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The current location of the manager’s office is on the first floor.
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