Phân tích"The maps below show Pebbleton 20 years ago and today"IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (kèm bài sửa)

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The maps below show Pebbleton 20 years ago and today

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  • Overall: the town has become more residential and offers more access for pedestrians  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The island turned out to be more for residential purposes and introduced pedestrian-friendly amenities HOẶC: Pebbleton has undergone enormous developments with the improvement of road infrastructure as well as the addition of more houses and more recreational facilities, tranforming the town into a more urbanized)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Phân biệt "access" dùng như danh từ & động từ
  • Body 1: Viết về biểu đồ 1
    • 20 years ago, Pebbleton was an underdeveloped peninsula connected with the mainland via Roadbridge, which was the only way to go to school on another side of the river. 
    • In the central area, a playing field running horizontally along Old Ford Road and a film studio occupied the southern part of the peninsula  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách viết dạng MAP IELTS WRITING TASK 1
    • The nothern part was dedicated to a lighthouse, an old ford, and a row of houses constructed along the coastline, which was only accessible via Lighthouse Lane
  • Body 2: Viết về biểu đồ 2
    • The number of houses has been increased, and a new pedestrian bridge has developed from the school to Pembleton.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "hamper" tiếng anh
    • The coastal fort is replaced into a children’s playground with installing a new community center near to it. 
    • The film studio was refurbished into a residential flat and a newly designed footpath running in between the flat and revenue court. 
    • The playing field, which is located in the southern part, and the light hose situated in the western part remain untouched.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ"user"tiếng anh 

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