🔥Phân tích"The map below show a school in 1985 and the school now."IELTS WRITING TASK 1- Bài mẫu, kèm dịch & giải thích từ vựng & cấu trúc grammar khó​ (Đề thi 20/9/2023 & 22/3/2025)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The map below show a school in 1985 and the school now."IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi 20/9/2023)

The map below show a school in 1985 and the school now.

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  • Overall:
    • The school has undergone substantial changes to accommodate its growing student population, primarily involving the addition of extra classrooms and the construction of various sports and educational facilities. 
    • Alterations have also been made to improve access and parking.
  • Body 1: Viết về map 1
    • Back in 1985, the school had 1500 students. 
    • The western part of the campus included classrooms, a small parking area, a library, and an office, while the eastern side featured a two-story classroom block. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Access to the campus was through entrance and exit points on both sides of a large northern parking lot, with a road branching off towards extensive playing fields in the south.
  • Body 2: Viết về map 2
    • Currently, the student population has increased significantly to 2300. 
    • While the office remains unchanged, the library has been downsized and transformed into a modern learning resources center with a computer room. This allowed for the expansion of the classroom building, now located just south of it. 
    • Adjacent to this is a newly constructed gymnasium featuring an indoor swimming pool, occupying roughly half of the former playing fields. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
    • A third floor has been added to the classroom block, and more classrooms have been constructed to its south.
    • In the north, the small parking lot has been entirely removed, and the rectangular one has been reshaped into a semicircular design. 
    • Finally, a cluster of trees has replaced the central road within the campus.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The two maps illustrate how a school has evolved between 1985 and the present to accommodate an increasing number of students.

Overall:

The school has undergone a dramatic transformation (trải qua một sự thay đổi lớn - experienced a major change) to cater to a booming student population (số lượng học sinh tăng vọt - rapidly increasing number of students), with major modifications involving the addition of extra classrooms, the construction of new state-of-the-art sports facilities (cơ sở thể thao hiện đại - highly advanced sports amenities), and improvements in access and parking.

Body 1 (1985):

Back in 1985, the school had a modest enrollment (số lượng học sinh khiêm tốn - relatively small student population) of 1,500 students. The western section of the campus consisted of a compact parking lot (bãi đỗ xe nhỏ gọn - small parking area), an office, and a library, while the eastern part housed a two-story classroom block (khối lớp học hai tầng - a building with two floors).

A spacious playing field (sân chơi rộng rãi - large open area for sports) occupied the southern area, while a dual-access system (hệ thống lối vào kép - two separate entry points) enabled students to enter from both sides of a large rectangular parking lot (bãi đỗ xe hình chữ nhật - parking space with four straight sides) in the north. A road connected this area to the playing field.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Body 2 (Present):

Currently, the student population has surged to a staggering 2,300 (một con số đáng kinh ngạc 2300 - an impressive 2,300 students). While the office remains unaltered, the library has been downsized and repurposed (thu nhỏ và chuyển đổi mục đích sử dụng - reduced in size and given a new function) into a modern learning resources center (trung tâm tài nguyên học tập - a facility with study materials) that integrates a computer room. This modification allowed for the extension of classroom facilities (việc mở rộng cơ sở lớp học - expansion of school buildings), which are now situated just south of it.

Adjacent to this, a cutting-edge gymnasium (phòng tập thể dục hiện đại - advanced fitness center) has been built, complete with an indoor swimming pool (hồ bơi trong nhà - a pool located inside a building), occupying nearly half of the original playing fields. Furthermore, a third floor has been added to the classroom block, and additional classrooms have been constructed to its south.

In the north, the once compact parking lot (bãi đỗ xe từng nhỏ gọn - previously small parking area) has been entirely removed, while the rectangular parking area has been reconfigured into a semicircular design (bãi đỗ xe hình chữ nhật đã được tái thiết kế thành dạng hình bán nguyệt - reshaped into a curved layout). Lastly, a lush cluster of trees (một cụm cây xanh tươi tốt - a dense area with trees) has replaced the central thoroughfare (con đường trung tâm - the main road within the school).

New Vocabulary & Meanings:

1. Undergone a dramatic transformation – Trải qua một sự thay đổi lớn

2. Booming student population – Số lượng học sinh tăng vọt

3. State-of-the-art sports facilities – Cơ sở thể thao hiện đại

4. A modest enrollment – Số lượng học sinh khiêm tốn

5. A compact parking lot – Bãi đỗ xe nhỏ gọn

6. Two-story classroom block – Khối lớp học hai tầng

7. Spacious playing field – Sân chơi rộng rãi

8. Dual-access system – Hệ thống lối vào kép

9. Rectangular parking lot – Bãi đỗ xe hình chữ nhật

10. A staggering 2,300 – Một con số đáng kinh ngạc 2300

11. Downsized and repurposed – Thu nhỏ và chuyển đổi mục đích sử dụng

12. Learning resources center – Trung tâm tài nguyên học tập

13. Extension of classroom facilities – Việc mở rộng cơ sở lớp học

14. Cutting-edge gymnasium – Phòng tập thể dục hiện đại

15. Indoor swimming pool – Hồ bơi trong nhà

16. Once compact parking lot – Bãi đỗ xe từng nhỏ gọn

17. Reconfigured into a semicircular design – Tái thiết kế thành dạng hình bán nguyệt

18. A lush cluster of trees – Một cụm cây xanh tươi tốt

19. Central thoroughfare – Con đường trung tâm

Synonyms & Antonyms:

1. "Booming student population"

• Synonyms: rapidly increasing number of students, soaring student enrollment, escalating student numbers

• Antonyms: declining student population, dwindling student numbers, shrinking enrollment

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "The school has undergone a dramatic transformation to cater to a booming student population."

2. "Cutting-edge gymnasium"

• Synonyms: modern fitness center, advanced sports hall, high-tech gym

• Antonyms: outdated gymnasium, old-fashioned sports hall, basic fitness facility

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Adjacent to this, a cutting-edge gymnasium has been built, complete with an indoor swimming pool."

3. "Downsized and repurposed"

• Synonyms: reduced and converted, shrunk and redesigned, minimized and reassigned

• Antonyms: expanded and upgraded, enlarged and improved, increased and enhanced

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "The library has been downsized and repurposed into a modern learning resources center."

Difficult Grammar Structures & Translations:

1. Relative Clause with a Preposition at the End

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ "A road connected this area to the playing field, which the students used for various activities."

   • (Một con đường kết nối khu vực này với sân chơi, nơi học sinh sử dụng cho nhiều hoạt động khác nhau.)

2. Cleft Sentence for Emphasis

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ "It is the library that has been downsized and repurposed into a learning resources center."

   • (Chính thư viện đã bị thu nhỏ và chuyển đổi thành trung tâm tài nguyên học tập.)

3. Passive Voice for Formality

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ "A third floor has been added to the classroom block, and additional classrooms have been constructed."

   • (Tầng ba đã được thêm vào khối lớp học và các lớp học bổ sung đã được xây dựng.)

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