Phân tích "The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s." IELTS WRITING TASK 1

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s." IELTS WRITING TASK 1.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

Bài này là dạng mixed, tức là có 2 biểu đồ khác nhau, mỗi body sẽ viết 1 biểu đồ nên body 1 mình viết table, thì do viết tầm 160 từ cho task 1 thôi nên xét table đó viết ngắn gọn thôi nha, tức là sẽ mô tả cái total land degraded rồi sau đó ở từng khu vực mình sẽ chọn thông tin nổi bật để viết nguyên nhân vì sao đất lại bị thoái hoá ở những vùng đó như sau:

• Nearly a quarter of land in Europe was damaged, roughly 10% of which was due to forest destruction (tức là gần 1/4 đất ở Europe bị thoái hoá, trong đó nguyên nhân 9.8% là do phá rừng - deforestation, không cần đề cập mấy cái còn lại như over-cultivation, over-grazing vì thông tin không quan trong cho Europe và không đủ giờ để làm) 
• In Oceania, the total land area degraded accounted for 13%, but over-grazing was attributed to over 11% of the unproductive land. 
• In North America, the percentage of degraded land was only 5%, and over-cultivation was the main reason, responsible for 3.3%.

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  • Overall:
    • The total percentage of degraded land in Europe was highest.
    • Overgrazing and over-cultivation were the main culprits of reducing land productivity in the whole world. 
  • Body 1: Viết về biểu đồ 1
    • Nearly a quarter of land in Europe was damaged, roughly 10% of which was due to forest destruction. 
    • In Oceania, the total land area degraded accounted for 13%, but over-grazing was attributed to over 11% of the unproductive land. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ ATTRIBUTE trong tiếng anh
    • In North America, the percentage of degraded land was only 5%, and over-cultivation was the main reason, responsible for 3.3%.
  • Body 2: Viết về biểu đồ 2
    • 35% of the total land was degraded because too many animals fed on it, followed by 30% over-cultivated. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "cultivate" trong tiếng anh
    • Deforestation was responsible for the degradation of 28% of land in the world while the other reasons were not significant contributing factors.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The pie chart illustrates the primary causes of agricultural land degradation worldwide, while the table provides details on how these factors impacted three regions during the 1990s.
Overall, Europe experienced the highest total percentage of degraded land, with overgrazing and over-cultivation being the leading causes of reduced land productivity globally.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Regarding the table, nearly a quarter (23%) of Europe’s land became unproductive, with deforestation accounting for about 10% of this figure. Oceania experienced 13% of its land being degraded, primarily due to overgrazing, which was responsible for over 11% of the total. In contrast, North America had the lowest percentage of degraded land at 5%, mainly due to over-cultivation, which caused 3.3% of the damage.

Moving onto the pie chart, overgrazing was identified as the main cause, responsible for 35% of land degradation, followed closely by over-cultivation at 30%. Deforestation accounted for 28% of the problem, while other factors had only a minimal impact on global land productivity.

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