Phân tích "The key to solving environmental problems is simple: present generations must have a less comfortable life for the sake of future generations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The key to solving environmental problems is simple: present generations must have a less comfortable life for the sake of future generations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

The key to solving environmental problems is simple: present generations must have a less comfortable life for the sake of future generations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Recent government policies and actions have made it easy for the current generation to make lifestyle changes that would benefit the environment at no significant burden to them.
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: People today can opt to reduce their carbon footprint and reduce environmental pollution by not using cars to travel, and relying on public transport such as trains and buses. This is because many governments have improved the mass transportation options available, and kept the rates low. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Paraphrase từ "public transport" 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: progress in technology and products available also make it easy for the present generation to save the environment at no significant cost to them.
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: For example, new biodegradable plastics have recently been invented to replace old plastics that pollute the environment and have been adopted by manufacturers of single use plastic bags at no additional cost. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase từ "Replace" tiếng anh
• IELTS TUTOR gợi ý thêm một vài ideas nếu chọn theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE 
  • Main idea 1: it is a well-known reality that the primary cause of environmental concerns is the rising human desire for affluent lives, which puts undue strain on our ecosystem.
    • Supporting idea:  If the current generation can make a few modifications in their daily lives, such as utilising paper bags instead of poly bags for grocery shopping, the global impact of such efforts can greatly alleviate today’s environmental challenges. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Phân biệt cách dùng impact như động từ & danh từ 
    • Example: 
  • Main idea 2: people’s sacrifices are necessary because other options, such as tighter rules enacted by governments, we’re unable to make any difference in resolving environmental issues.
    • Supporting idea: 
      • Due to a lack of funding and staff to implement the legislation, the state’s efforts are futile.
      • The participation of people has become the single most important factor with the potential to ameliorate environmental concerns and ensure a safe future. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "factor" tiếng anh
    • Example: 

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