🔥Phân tích "The chart shows the information relating to people within 15-minute drive service in a particular region in the UK. It also compares the people living in urban areas and people living in rural areas" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - Bài mẫu, kèm dịch & giải thích từ vựng & cấu trúc grammar khó​ (Đề thi 23/12/2022 & 3/3/2025)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The chart shows the information relating to people within 15-minute drive service in a particular region in the UK. It also compares the people living in urban areas and people living in rural areas" IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi 23/12/2022)

The chart shows the information relating to people within 15-minute drive service in a particular region in the UK. It also compares the people living in urban areas and people living in rural areas.

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  • Overall:
    • All the services are accessible to urban dwellers within a quarter of an hour.
    • Only the services of a doctor and secondary school are available to all the people of rural area within 15 minute drive. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the rural and urban communities have similar access to medical, postal and secondary school facilities but only about a third of villagers do not live close to a primary school)
  • Body 1: Viết về Doctor + Primary school 
    • All the residents of urban areas and rural areas have access to the service of a medical practitioner in a drive of fifteen minutes. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Phân biệt "access" dùng như danh từ & động từ 
    • Secondary school is within a 15 minute drive and is accessible to 100% of the population of both urban and rural area. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: secondary school can be reached within 15 minutes by all residents of villages and cities)
  • Body 2: Viết về Post office + Secondary school 
    • While postal services are available in a drive of 15 minutes for all city residents, it is reachable within the same time for 95% of the rural population and the remaining population need to drive longer than 15 minutes to access this facility. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "population" tiếng anh
    • The primary school is in proximity of 15 minute drive to 100% of urban people, but only about 65% of ruralites can avail this service in the same time frame. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Only sixty five percent of villagers have a primary school within a quarter of an hour drive, where as the remaining, approximately, one third inhabitants of countryside have to drive their children to far-off schools)

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The given chart illustrates (minh họa - depict, show, present) the proportion of people who can access essential amenities (tiện ích - facilities, services, conveniences) within a quarter-hour (một phần tư giờ - 15-minute) drive in an undisclosed (không được tiết lộ - unspecified, unknown, unrevealed) region of the UK, distinguishing between metropolitan (thuộc đô thị - urban, city-based, municipal) and rural inhabitants (người dân nông thôn - villagers, countryside residents, non-urban dwellers).

Overall

It is evident that most public services (dịch vụ công - government-provided facilities, municipal services, social services) are readily available (có sẵn một cách dễ dàng - easily accessible, within reach, conveniently obtainable) to urbanites (dân thành thị - city dwellers, town residents, metropolitan people), whereas rural residents experience disparities (sự chênh lệch - inequalities, gaps, imbalances) in access, particularly concerning primary schools.

Body 1

Both urban and rural populations enjoy universal (phổ cập - comprehensive, widespread, all-inclusive) access to medical practitioners (bác sĩ - doctors, healthcare providers, physicians) within a 15-minute drive. Similarly, secondary education facilities (cơ sở giáo dục trung học - high school institutions, secondary schools, educational establishments) are available within the same distance to all residents, irrespective of (bất kể - regardless of, despite, notwithstanding) their location.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Body 2

While postal services (dịch vụ bưu chính - mail facilities, delivery services, correspondence network) are within reach for all urban dwellers, 95% of rural inhabitants can access them within a quarter-hour, leaving the remaining fraction requiring a lengthier commute (quãng đường đi dài hơn - extended travel, prolonged journey, farther trip). However, a notable gap exists in primary school accessibility: while all city dwellers have a school nearby, only roughly two-thirds (khoảng hai phần ba - about 65%, approximately 66%, nearly two-thirds) of ruralites can avail themselves of (tận dụng - take advantage of, benefit from, make use of) this service, forcing the rest to undertake a considerable (đáng kể - significant, substantial, notable) journey to distant schools.

Synonyms & Antonyms

1. "Illustrates"

• Synonyms: depicts, demonstrates, portrays
• Antonyms: obscures, conceals, misrepresents
• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "The given chart illustrates the proportion of people who can access essential amenities within a quarter-hour drive."

2. "Readily available"

• Synonyms: easily accessible, within reach, conveniently obtainable
• Antonyms: scarce, limited, restricted
• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Most public services are readily available to urbanites, whereas rural residents experience disparities in access."

3. "Considerable"

• Synonyms: significant, substantial, notable
• Antonyms: negligible, trivial, minor
• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Forcing the rest to undertake a considerable journey to distant schools."

Difficult Grammar Structures

1. Cleft Sentence (Emphasizing Public Services Availability)

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "It is evident that most public services are readily available to urbanites, whereas rural residents experience disparities in access."
• Translation: "Rõ ràng rằng hầu hết các dịch vụ công đều có sẵn cho cư dân thành thị, trong khi đó người dân vùng nông thôn gặp nhiều chênh lệch về tiếp cận."

2. Inversion (Negative Sentence for Emphasis)

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Not only do urban residents have full access to primary schools, but they also benefit from readily available medical services."
• Translation: "Không chỉ cư dân thành thị được tiếp cận hoàn toàn với các trường tiểu học, mà họ còn hưởng lợi từ các dịch vụ y tế sẵn có."

3. Relative Clause (Adding Extra Information)

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "The remaining fraction, who need to drive longer than 15 minutes, face significant challenges in accessing postal services."
• Translation: "Phần dân số còn lại, những người phải lái xe hơn 15 phút, gặp nhiều khó khăn trong việc tiếp cận dịch vụ bưu chính."

4. Complex Compound Sentence (Balancing Two Ideas)

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "While postal services are within reach for all urban dwellers, 95% of rural inhabitants can access them within a quarter-hour, leaving the remaining fraction requiring a lengthier commute."
• Translation: "Trong khi dịch vụ bưu chính có sẵn cho tất cả cư dân thành phố, 95% dân cư nông thôn có thể tiếp cận dịch vụ này trong vòng 15 phút, khiến phần còn lại phải di chuyển xa hơn."

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