🔥Phân tích "The graph shows the Japanese average monthly salary (Yen) from 1953 to 1983, and the prices of black and white television and color television during the same period" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (đề thi 28/5/2022 & 15/10/2023 & 2/3/2025) - Bài mẫu, kèm dịch & giải thích từ vựng & cấu trúc grammar khó​

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The graph shows the Japanese average monthly salary (Yen) from 1953 to 1983, and the prices of black and white television and color television during the same period." IELTS WRITING TASK 1.

The graph shows the Japanese average monthly salary (Yen) from 1953 to 1983, and the prices of black and white television and color television during the same period.

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  • Overall:
    • While the average salary witnessed an upward trend over time, the opposite was true for the price of both types of televisions.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "opposite" tiếng anh
    • Color televisions cost much more than black and white ones. 
  • Body 1: Viết về Monthly salary
    • The average Japanese monthly salary at the start of the period (20,000 Yen), but the figure grew gradually from 1953 to 1973 (nêu số liệu) before soaring to nearly 70,000 Yen in 1983.
  • Body 2:  Viết về 2 category còn lại
    • In 1953, a black and white television cost around 110,000 Yen. Ten years later, the cost saw a sharp decline and then continued to drop gradually to about 20,000 Yen by 1983. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "decline" tiếng anh
    • The price of color TVs followed a similar pattern, costing about 100,000 Yen when first appearing, and then significantly declining over the following years to just under 50,000 Yen by the end of the period.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The Japanese average monthly salary (mức lương trung bình hàng tháng của người Nhật) saw a steady upward trajectory (xu hướng tăng ổn định) over the 30-year period, whereas both black-and-white TVs (tivi đen trắng) and color televisions (tivi màu) became significantly cheaper. Notably, color TVs were consistently costlier (tivi màu luôn đắt đỏ hơn) than their monochrome counterparts.

At the beginning of the period, the typical salary (mức lương điển hình) in Japan was a mere (chỉ vỏn vẹn) 20,000 Yen. Over the next two decades, this figure experienced a moderate surge (tăng vừa phải) before skyrocketing (tăng vọt) to nearly (gần như) 70,000 Yen in 1983.

Meanwhile, in 1953, a standard black-and-white television (một chiếc tivi đen trắng tiêu chuẩn) was priced at roughly 110,000 Yen. Over the following decade, its cost plummeted drastically (giảm mạnh) and continued a gradual downward trend (xu hướng giảm dần) to just 20,000 Yen in 1983. Likewise, color televisions underwent a comparable pattern (tivi màu có xu hướng tương tự), initially priced at approximately 100,000 Yen before witnessing a substantial drop (chứng kiến sự sụt giảm đáng kể) to just under 50,000 Yen by the period’s end.

New Vocabulary:

1. Steady upward trajectory (xu hướng tăng ổn định) – A continuous increase over time.
2. Black-and-white TV (tivi đen trắng) – A television that displays only black, white, and shades of gray.
3. Color television (tivi màu) – A television that displays images in multiple colors.
4. Consistently costlier (luôn đắt đỏ hơn) – Always more expensive over time.
5. Typical salary (mức lương điển hình) – The common or average amount paid to workers.
6. A mere (chỉ vỏn vẹn) – Used to emphasize how small something is.
7. Experienced a moderate surge (tăng vừa phải) – Saw a small to medium increase.
8. Skyrocketing (tăng vọt) – Rising extremely quickly.
9. A standard black-and-white television (một chiếc tivi đen trắng tiêu chuẩn) – A typical TV model in black and white.
10. Plummeted drastically (giảm mạnh) – Fell suddenly and steeply.
11. A gradual downward trend (xu hướng giảm dần) – A slow and steady decrease.
12. Underwent a comparable pattern (có xu hướng tương tự) – Experienced a similar trend.
13. Witnessing a substantial drop (chứng kiến sự sụt giảm đáng kể) – Seeing a large decrease.

Synonyms & Antonyms:

1. Steady upward trajectory

   • Synonyms: gradual increase, consistent growth, sustained rise
   • Antonyms: sharp decline, abrupt fall, sudden drop
   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The Japanese average monthly salary saw a steady upward trajectory over the 30-year period.

2. Skyrocketing

   • Synonyms: surging, spiking, escalating
   • Antonyms: plunging, declining, collapsing
   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Over the next two decades, this figure skyrocketed to nearly 70,000 Yen in 1983.

3. Plummeted drastically

   • Synonyms: fell sharply, dropped steeply, declined rapidly
   • Antonyms: increased steadily, climbed gradually, rose progressively
   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Over the following decade, its cost plummeted drastically and continued a gradual downward trend to just 20,000 Yen in 1983.

Difficult Grammar Structures:

1. Complex sentence with contrast (Whereas clause)

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The Japanese average monthly salary saw a steady upward trajectory over the 30-year period, whereas both black-and-white TVs and color televisions became significantly cheaper.
   • Translation: Mức lương trung bình hàng tháng của người Nhật có xu hướng tăng ổn định trong suốt 30 năm, trong khi cả tivi đen trắng và tivi màu trở nên rẻ hơn đáng kể.

2. Participle clause for cause-effect

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Over the next two decades, this figure experienced a moderate surge before skyrocketing to nearly 70,000 Yen in 1983.
   • Translation: Trong hai thập kỷ tiếp theo, con số này tăng vừa phải trước khi tăng vọt lên gần 70.000 Yên vào năm 1983.

3. Reduced relative clause

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Color televisions underwent a comparable pattern, initially priced at approximately 100,000 Yen before witnessing a substantial drop.
   • Translation: Tivi màu có xu hướng tương tự, ban đầu được định giá khoảng 100.000 Yên trước khi chứng kiến sự sụt giảm đáng kể.

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