Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The graph below shows the types of transport used by tourists who visited New Zealand from five countries in 2004."IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 23/6/2023)
I. Đề bài
The graph below shows the types of transport used by tourists who visited New Zealand from five countries in 2004.

II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Overall:
- Among British, German, and Australian tourists, the coach was the least favored mode of transport, while the Japanese and Koreans showed the least inclination towards using ferries.
- Body 1: Car + Coach
- Car
- Approximately 60% of British tourists, and around 52%, 50%, and 45% of German, Korean, and Australian tourists, respectively, chose to use cars to explore different locations in New Zealand.
- In contrast, the lowest percentage of Japanese tourists (25%) opted for car travel within New Zealand. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng"by contrast/in contrast/in contrast to sth"
- Coach
- A similar percentage of British and German tourists (20%) utilized coach transportation, whereas Koreans were almost twice as likely (40%) to use coaches compared to British and German tourists.
- Japanese tourists had the highest percentage of coach usage (52%), while only 8% of Australian tourists relied on this mode of transportation.
- Car
- Body 2: Air + Ferry
- Air
- Japanese tourists exhibited a strong preference for air travel, with roughly 55% utilizing air transport. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng & Word form của "preference / prefer"
- Air travel was also popular among 35% of British tourists, 30% of Korean tourists, and 25% of German tourists.
- However, only 11% of Australian tourists chose air transport.
- Ferry
- The ferry was used by nearly 48% of German tourists and 35% of British tourists.
- On the other hand, Japanese and Korean tourists each accounted for less than 15% of ferry users, and Australian tourists were also in this range.
- Air
- Overall:
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The bar chart illustrates the modes of transport (phương tiện giao thông) chosen by tourists from five nations who visited New Zealand in 2004.
Overall, cars were the predominant (chiếm ưu thế) means of transportation for most nationalities except the Japanese, who exhibited a pronounced (rõ ràng, nổi bật) inclination for air travel. In contrast, coach travel (di chuyển bằng xe khách) was relatively unpopular (không phổ biến) among British, German, and Australian tourists, whereas Japanese and Korean visitors favored it more.
In terms of private vehicles (phương tiện cá nhân), around 60% of British tourists utilized cars, followed by 52%, 50%, and 45% of German, Korean, and Australian visitors, respectively. Conversely, the Japanese exhibited the least reliance on (dựa vào ít nhất) cars, with only 25% choosing this option. Meanwhile, coach travel showed stark variations, with approximately 20% of British and German visitors opting for it, compared to a notably higher (cao hơn đáng kể) 40% among Koreans. Japanese tourists had the highest proportion at 52%, while only 8% of Australians relied on this mode.
Regarding airborne travel (hình thức di chuyển bằng đường hàng không), over half of Japanese visitors (55%) opted for this method, compared to 35% of British, 30% of Korean, and 25% of German tourists. Australians, on the other hand, had the lowest uptake (tỷ lệ sử dụng thấp nhất) at 11%. Ferry usage was relatively prevalent (khá phổ biến) among German and British visitors (48% and 35%, respectively), while fewer than 15% of Japanese and Korean tourists chose this means of transport. Australians fell within a similar range.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
New Vocabulary & Explanations
Modes of transport (phương tiện giao thông) = types of transportation.
Predominant (chiếm ưu thế) = being the most common or having the greatest importance.
Pronounced (rõ ràng, nổi bật) = very noticeable or marked.
Coach travel (di chuyển bằng xe khách) = traveling by coach/bus.
Unpopular (không phổ biến) = not commonly chosen or liked.
Private vehicles (phương tiện cá nhân) = personally owned transportation.
Least reliance on (dựa vào ít nhất) = depending on the least.
Notably higher (cao hơn đáng kể) = significantly greater.
Airborne travel (hình thức di chuyển bằng đường hàng không) = traveling via air.
Lowest uptake (tỷ lệ sử dụng thấp nhất) = the smallest number of people using something.
Relatively prevalent (khá phổ biến) = comparatively common.
Synonyms & Antonyms
Predominant
Synonyms: dominant, prevailing, principal
Antonyms: minor, secondary, insignificant
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Cars were the predominant means of transportation for most nationalities."Pronounced
Synonyms: marked, striking, evident
Antonyms: subtle, slight, faint
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "The Japanese exhibited a pronounced inclination for air travel."Notably higher
Synonyms: significantly greater, considerably larger, markedly superior
Antonyms: marginally different, slightly higher, nearly the same
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Koreans had a notably higher percentage of coach users."
Difficult Grammar Structures & Examples
Relative Clauses
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "The bar chart illustrates the modes of transport chosen by tourists who visited New Zealand in 2004."
(Biểu đồ cột minh hoạ đồ phương tiện giao thông mà du khách đã lựa chọn khi đến New Zealand vào năm 2004.)
Comparative Structures
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Coach travel was relatively unpopular among British, German, and Australian tourists, whereas Japanese and Korean visitors favored it more."
(Di chuyển bằng xe khách tương đối không phổ biến đối với du khách Anh, Đức và Úc, trong khi người Nhật và Hàn lại ưa chuộng hơn.)
Passive Voice
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "The ferry was used by nearly 48% of German tourists and 35% of British tourists."
(Phà được sử dụng bởi gần 48% du khách Đức và 35% du khách Anh.)

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