Phân tích"The graph below shows the number of passenger railway journeys made in Great Britain between 1950 and 2004/5"IELTS WRITING TASK 1

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The graph below shows the number of passenger railway journeys made in Great Britain between 1950 and 2004/5"IELTS WRITING TASK 1

The graph below shows the number of passenger railway journeys made in Great Britain between 1950 and 2004/5

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  • Overall:
    • The number of passenger trips on the National Rail System and the London Underground showed variation (HOẶC cũng có thể nói nó có xu hướng tăng luôn nhé: The overall trend for all three networks is upward, with the National Rail network and the London Underground showing the most significant growth)
    • The tendency for light rail and metro systems was generally increasing.
  • Body 1: Viết về National rail network + London Underground 
    • Viết về National rail network
      • Between 1950 and 1960, the National Rail network experienced a slight rise in passenger journeys, followed by a decline over the next two decades (nêu số liệu)
      • However, from the 1980s to the early 2000s, there was a notable surge in passenger journeys, peaking at around 1.1 billion in 2004/5.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Viết về London Underground
      • The London Underground also saw a decline in passenger journeys from the 1960s to the 1980s (nêu số liệu)
      • In the 1990s, the London Underground saw a significant increase in passenger journeys, reaching a peak of approximately 700 million in 2004/5.
  • Body 2: Viết về Light rail & metro systems
    • The Light Railway and Metro systems recorded the lowest number of passenger journeys throughout the depicted period and only registered data in 1965, with 10 million passengers.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn Cách dùng động từ "record" tiếng anh
    • However, between 1980 and 2004/5, the number of passenger journeys on these systems escalated dramatically, reaching nearly 200 million in 2004/5.

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