Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011." IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 16/2/2023)
I. Đề bài
The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
- Dạng biểu đồ này thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
- Overall
- The number of enquiries received by letter or email experienced a slight decrease while a substantial rise of enquiries was recorded in the site and via telephone.
- Body 1: Viết số liệu giảm
- In January, the figure for enquiries by letter or email stood at nearly 800, and then a marginal drop of 200 units was observed in the next six months.
- Body 2: Viết số liệu tăng
- Starting at just over 400 units in January, the number of off-site enquiries witnessed a significant increase to 1900 units in Jun.
- Despite a higher starting point, with 900 enquiries which doubled the number of enquiries received in person, the volume of telephone ones had undertaken the offline cases, with only 1600 enquiries in June >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase động từ"receive"(Diễn đạt"nhận" tiếng anh)
- Overall
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The line graph illustrates how many enquiries (các câu hỏi - questions or requests for information) were received by a Tourist Information Office in a particular city between January and June 2011 via three distinct channels (ba kênh khác nhau - clearly different means of communication).
Overall, in-person (trực tiếp - face-to-face) enquiries underwent a dramatic surge (tăng vọt mạnh - a sharp and large increase), while written communication (liên lạc bằng văn bản - communication via letters or emails) showed a steady decline (sự giảm đều - gradual decrease). Enquiries via telephone rose moderately.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
In January, postal and electronic queries (các câu hỏi qua thư và điện tử - questions sent by letter and email) accounted for around 800, but this figure fell gradually to approximately 600 by June.
Conversely, the number of people making face-to-face enquiries (các câu hỏi trực tiếp - questions asked in person) skyrocketed (tăng vọt - rose extremely quickly) from just over 400 to nearly 1900, becoming the most popular method by June. Meanwhile, telephone enquiries began at 900, plateaued in February and March, and then climbed to about 1600 by the end of the period.
🟦 Synonyms & Antonyms (for 3 bolded words)
Skyrocketed
Synonyms: soared, escalated, spiked
Antonyms: plunged, slumped, dropped
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “face-to-face enquiries skyrocketed from just over 400 to nearly 1900”
Dramatic surge
Synonyms: sharp increase, rapid growth, explosion
Antonyms: dramatic fall, gradual dip, decline
Steady decline
Synonyms: gradual drop, slow decrease, consistent reduction
Antonyms: steady rise, gradual increase, upward trend
📙 Difficult Grammar Structures with Explanation & Vietnamese Translation
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ “...which doubled the number of in-person enquiries”
→ Relative clause giving extra info.
Tạm dịch: “con số này gấp đôi số lượng các câu hỏi trực tiếp.”
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ “...from just over 400 to nearly 1900, becoming the most popular method”
→ Reduced relative clause / participle phrase
Tạm dịch: “từ hơn 400 lên gần 1900, trở thành phương pháp phổ biến nhất.”
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ “...plateaued in February and March, and then climbed...”
→ Use of past simple with linking actions in sequence
Tạm dịch: “ổn định trong tháng 2 và 3, sau đó tăng lên...”

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