Phân tích"The graph below shows the information about medical care in three European countries between 1980 and 2000."IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 14/6/2023)

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The graph below shows the information about medical care in three European countries between 1980 and 2000

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  • Overall:
    • Sweden enjoyed the most favorable healthcare conditions, while France lagged behind the other two countries in terms of medical care throughout the two-decade period.
  • Body 1: Viết về physicians 
    • In Austria, the number of doctors experienced a slight rise from 0.8 per 1000 people in 1980 to 1.0 per 1000 people. 
    • France witnessed a decline in physician availability, dropping from 2.4 per 1000 people to 1.3 per 1000 people between 1980 and 2000. 
    • Sweden boasted the highest healthcare standards, with 3.6 doctors per 1000 people in 1980. Although this number decreased to 3.0 per 1000 people in 1990, it rebounded in 2000 to reach 3.8 per 1000 people. >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Word form của từ "Decrease" tiếng anh
  • Body 2: Viết về hospital beds 
    • France experienced the most significant growth in the number of hospital beds per thousand, soaring from 0.2 in 1980 to 1.6 in 2000, an eight-fold increase. 
    • Austria also witnessed a substantial increase, from 1.4 to 3.7 beds per 1000 people during the given period. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "period" tiếng anh
    • Sweden maintained its lead in this aspect as well, with 6.4 beds per 1000 people in both 1980 and 1990. By 2000, the number of hospital beds had risen to 6.9 per 1000 people.
  • Body 3: Viết về average stay in hospitals 
    • The average length of hospital stays was longest in Sweden, averaging around 20 days throughout the specified time frame. 
    • In France, the average duration gradually decreased from 9 days in 1980 to 5 days in 2000. 
    • Austria experienced a significant reduction in hospitalization periods, decreasing from 18 days in 1980 to 8 days in 2000.

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