🔥Phân tích"The graph below shows the average time spent by four car manufactures to produce vehicles at their us factories."IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 16/3/2023)- Bài mẫu, kèm dịch & giải thích từ vựng & cấu trúc grammar khó​

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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The graph below shows the average time spent by four car manufactures to produce vehicles at their us factories."IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 16/3/2023)

I. Đề bài

The graph below shows the average time spent by four car manufactures to produce vehicles at their us factories

The graph below shows the average time spent by four car manufactures to produce vehicles at their us factories​

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

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    • Overall: 
      • It shows a trend of decreasing production time for these companies during this period
    • Body 1: Viết về General Motor + Ford 
      • In 1998, General Motors took approximately 32 hours, the longest among the four companies. Over the next seven years, there was a consistent decrease in this duration, reaching around 22 hours. 
      • Ford's production time exceeded that of General Motors in 1999, starting at nearly 28 hours and peaking at just under 31 hours in 2001. However, it then notably decreased by almost 10 hours by the end of the period.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Body 2: Viết về Toyota + Honda 
      • Toyota and Honda began at a similar 22-hour production time. Both experienced significant fluctuations in the subsequent years but ultimately reduced their production time to just 20 hours by the end of the period.

 

 

 

 

 

 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The line graph illustrates the average production time (average production timethời gian sản xuất trung bình: the mean duration taken to manufacture one vehicle) for four prominent car manufacturers in the US over a seven-year period (seven-year periodgiai đoạn kéo dài bảy năm: a span of seven years), starting from 1998.

Overall, there was a downward trend (downward trendxu hướng giảm dần: a steady decline) in vehicle manufacturing time among all four companies, indicating improved manufacturing efficiency (manufacturing efficiencyhiệu suất sản xuất: the ability to produce vehicles faster with fewer resources).

General Motors, initially the least time-efficient (least time-efficientít hiệu quả về thời gian nhất: requiring the most hours to produce one unit) in 1998 with nearly 32 hours, saw a steady decline to 22 hours by 2005. Ford, despite starting below GM at roughly 28 hours, surpassed (surpassedvượt qua: to exceed or go beyond) GM’s time in 1999 and peaked at almost 31 hours in 2001. Nevertheless, it then experienced a notable drop (notable dropgiảm đáng kể: a significant reduction) of about 10 hours by the end of the timeframe.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Toyota and Honda both started at a moderate level (moderate levelmức trung bình: not too high nor too low) of around 22 hours. Although they showed some year-to-year fluctuations (year-to-year fluctuationsdao động hàng năm: changes from one year to the next), their production times gradually decreased to approximately 20 hours in 2005, making them the most time-efficient (most time-efficienthiệu quả nhất về thời gian: requiring the fewest hours) by the end of the period.

🔍 New Vocabulary List (with explanation)

  1. average production timethời gian sản xuất trung bình
    → The mean time taken to produce a vehicle.
    Synonyms: mean duration, typical time, average duration
    Antonyms: maximum time, minimum time, zero output
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "The line graph illustrates the average production time..."

  2. seven-year periodgiai đoạn kéo dài bảy năm
    → A span of seven years.
    Synonyms: seven-year span, seven-year duration, seven-year interval
    Antonyms: short-term, brief period, moment
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "...in the US over a seven-year period..."

  3. downward trendxu hướng giảm dần
    → A pattern of decreasing numbers.
    Synonyms: declining pattern, falling trend, reduction
    Antonyms: upward trend, increase, growth
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "...there was a downward trend in vehicle manufacturing time..."

  4. manufacturing efficiencyhiệu suất sản xuất
    → The productivity or speed of vehicle production.
    Synonyms: production effectiveness, operational efficiency, output rate
    Antonyms: inefficiency, sluggishness, wastefulness
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "...indicating improved manufacturing efficiency."

  5. least time-efficientít hiệu quả về thời gian nhất
    → Requiring the most time to finish a task.
    Synonyms: slowest, most time-consuming, least productive
    Antonyms: most efficient, fastest, quickest
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "General Motors, initially the least time-efficient..."

  6. surpassedvượt qua
    → Exceeded or went beyond.
    Synonyms: outperformed, exceeded, outpaced
    Antonyms: fell behind, lagged, underperformed
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Ford... surpassed GM’s time in 1999..."

  7. notable dropgiảm đáng kể
    → A clear and important decrease.
    Synonyms: significant decline, sharp fall, marked decrease
    Antonyms: rise, growth, surge
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "...experienced a notable drop of about 10 hours..."

  8. moderate levelmức trung bình
    → Neither high nor low, average.
    Synonyms: mid-range, intermediate level, medium
    Antonyms: extreme, high level, low level
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Toyota and Honda both started at a moderate level..."

  9. year-to-year fluctuationsdao động hàng năm
    → Annual variations.
    Synonyms: annual shifts, yearly changes, interannual variability
    Antonyms: consistency, stability, unchanging
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "...showed some year-to-year fluctuations..."

  10. most time-efficienthiệu quả nhất về thời gian
    → Taking the least amount of time to complete a task.
    Synonyms: quickest, fastest, most productive
    Antonyms: least efficient, slowest, time-consuming
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "...making them the most time-efficient..."

Advanced Grammar Structures

  1. Non-defining relative clause
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Ford, despite starting below GM at roughly 28 hours, surpassed GM’s time in 1999..."
    Ford, mặc dù bắt đầu thấp hơn GM khoảng 28 giờ, đã vượt qua thời gian của GM vào năm 1999.

  2. Reduced relative clause
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Toyota and Honda, starting at a moderate level..."
    Toyota và Honda, bắt đầu ở mức trung bình...
    (instead of: Toyota and Honda, which started at a moderate level…)

  3. Present participle clause
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "...indicating improved manufacturing efficiency."
    Điều này cho thấy hiệu quả sản xuất được cải thiện.
    (Used to show the result or implication of the clause before)

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