Phân tích"The education of young people is highly prioritized in many countries. However, educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important and governments should spend more money on this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 18/5/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The education of young people is highly prioritized in many countries. However, educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important and governments should spend more money on this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 18/5/2023)

The education of young people is highly prioritized in many countries. However, educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important and governments should spend more money on this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Educated adults can make more informed decisions regarding their health, finances, and overall well-being. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "well-being" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: Adult education can promote personal development, critical thinking, and decision-making skills, leading to improved quality of life for individuals and their families.
      • Example: Through adult education focused on entrepreneurship, my aunt gains the skills and knowledge to start a successful online boutique, leading to personal growth, financial stability, and an improved quality of life for herself and her family.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: By investing in adult education, governments can help enhance the employability of adults, reducing unemployment rates and contributing to economic growth
      • Supporting idea: 
        • By providing adults with educational opportunities, they can acquire new skills, knowledge, and qualifications that make them more competitive in the job market. 
        • This increased employability leads to higher chances of finding suitable employment, reducing unemployment rates in the population. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "employment" tiếng anh
        • As more adults gain employment and contribute to the workforce, the overall economic productivity and growth of the country can be positively impacted.
      • Example: For instance, a middle-aged individual who faced job loss due to technological advancements can enroll in adult education programs, acquire new skills in areas like digital marketing or coding, and subsequently secure employment in a thriving tech firm, thereby enhancing their personal finances and making valuable contributions to the economy through their productive work.

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