Phân tích"The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980."IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 22/3/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980." IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi IELTS 22/3/2023)

The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980.

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  • Overall:

    • The docks have undergone extensive redevelopment, transforming the previously industrial area into a versatile space that now includes a variety of recreational, educational, and residential facilities on both sides of the river.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)

  • Body 1: Viết về map 1

    • In earlier times/In the past, the northern bank of the river featured two warehouses accompanied by an adjacent crane.>> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "crane" tiếng anh

    • The southern bank had one warehouse and another crane. 
    • The river previously facilitated ships journeying towards the coast.
  • Body 2: Viết về map 2

    • At present, the northern bank showcases a sailing club, an educational facility (repurposed from a warehouse), and a designated area for children to play.>> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "education" tiếng anh

    • The redevelopment of the southern bank encompasses a hotel, residential units (converted from a warehouse), and parking amenities, accompanied by a riverfront promenade extending along the bank. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The southern bank has been redeveloped to include a hotel, apartments (repurposed from a warehouse), and parking facilities, accompanied by a river walk that stretches along the bank)

    • Regarding the river itself, ships are no longer present, and instead, a ship museum has been established on the eastern side, adjacent to the northern bank 

    • A bridge has been constructed to link the banks on the western side of the map, accompanied by a a strategically placed flood barrier.>> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "erect" tiếng anh

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The diagram illustrates the transformation of Liverton docks from 1980 to the present day.

Overall, the area has undergone significant redevelopment, converting what was once an industrial zone into a dynamic space offering various recreational, educational, and residential facilities on both sides of the river.

In the past, the northern bank was home to two warehouses and an adjacent crane. On the southern bank, there was one warehouse and another crane. The river was primarily used by ships traveling towards the coast.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

In contrast, the current layout shows that the northern bank now hosts a sailing club, an educational facility (repurposed from a warehouse), and a children's play area. The southern bank has been redeveloped to feature a hotel, apartments (converted from a warehouse), and parking spaces, along with a riverfront promenade stretching along the bank. The river no longer accommodates ships; instead, a ship museum has been built on the eastern side near the northern bank. A bridge has been erected to connect both banks, with a strategically placed flood barrier on the western side.

New Vocabulary

• Redevelopment (tái phát triển): Refers to the process of improving or renewing an area, typically through construction or renovation.
• Dynamic (năng động): Refers to something that is constantly changing and evolving.
• Warehouses (kho hàng): Large buildings used for storing goods.
• Crane (cần cẩu): A large, tall machine used for lifting heavy objects, especially in construction or shipping.
• Apartments (căn hộ): Residential units in a building, typically for people to live in.
• Riverfront promenade (đại lộ ven sông): A walkway along the edge of the river, often designed for leisure or tourism.
• Ship museum (bảo tàng tàu): A museum dedicated to preserving and displaying ships or maritime history.
• Bridge (cầu): A structure built to span a physical obstacle, such as a river, allowing people or vehicles to cross.
• Flood barrier (rào chắn lũ): A structure designed to prevent flooding by blocking water from overflowing into certain areas.

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