Phân tích "The diagram below shows the steps of processing cocoa beans" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi 7/7/2022)

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The diagram below shows the steps of processing cocoa beans IELTS WRITING TASK 1.

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  • Đề có chia sẵn thành 3 stage có thể viết 3 đoạn thân bài tương ứng mỗi stage nhé.
    • Overall:
      • There are three stages in the process, from the initial whole beans to the final products in the market (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: this process is divided into three steps from collecting beans to distribute them to consumers)
    • Body 1: Stage 1
      • The whole beans are picked from the cocoa tree. After being picked, their outer shells are removed and they are dried from the next stage. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the process begins with pickup whole beans from the field later differ from their shells and dry under sunlight)
    • Body 2: Stage 2: 
      • The dried beans are pressed, and some of these pressed beans are further pressed to make cocoa cake, whereas the rest are refined to make industrial chocolate to which sugar is added. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The next stage of the process is divided into two parts. If it was pressing further, it makes cocoa and cocoa cake, whereas another is that industrial chocolates after refining and adding sugar and cocoa) >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Phân biệt While/ Whereas 
    • Body 3: Stage 3
      • The cocoa cake is ground to make cocoa powder, and liquor is obtained. 
      • The cocoa powder is sent to the market to be used by the consumer, whereas the cocoa liquor is used in the industry to make cakes and drinks. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "industry" tiếng anh 
      • The industrial chocolate is sent for final processing after which the finished chocolate products are finally consumed by consumers. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Further processing on industrial chocolate output is chocolate products that go straight to consumers)

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