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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity"IELTS WRITING TASK 1
I. Đề bài
The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Overall:
- There are five distinct stages in the process of electricity production from geothermal power, starting with the pumping down of cold water and ending with the production of electricity by a generator (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Overall, the station produces electricity in five main steps, namely pumping cold water underground, heating it, pumping heated water to the surface, converting it into steam, and using the steam to turn the turbine to create electricity HOẶC The cold water is heated to produce steam, and this steam is then used to power the generator which in turn produces electricity) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "PRODUCTION" tiếng anh
- Body 1:
- Cold water travels down a 4.5km long pipe into an injection well. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: cold water stored in the container is pumped down to the injection well that is 4.5 kilometers deep beneath the Earth’s surface) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "store" tiếng anh
- The water goes through an area called the geothermal zone, which contains a lot of hot rocks used to increase the temperature of the water. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The well then injects the water into the geothermal zone where it is heated by hot rocks)
- Body 2:
- The hot water is transferred into another well called the production well where it is pumped up to a condenser, ready for the next stage. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "transfer" tiếng anh
- In the condenser, the water transforms into steam and is used to power a turbine, which activates a generator to produce electricity. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: As the steam passes through the turbine, it drives its blades to rotate)
- The resulting electricity is distributed for different purposes via various electricity grids.
- Overall:
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