Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime. Do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 29/3/2024)
I. Đề bài
The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime. Do you agree or disagree?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
- Main idea: High-definition cameras, drones, and other surveillance technologies have become more accessible and efficient.
- Supporting idea: These systems help in deterring criminal activities and provide valuable evidence for solving crimes.
- Example: China exemplifies the increasing utilization of high-definition cameras, drones, and surveillance tech, significantly impacting public safety by deterring crime through the widespread presence of CCTV cameras in major cities and aiding law enforcement with evidence collection, enhancing their ability to identify suspects and secure convictions.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 1 (Complaint letter) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
- Main idea: High-definition cameras, drones, and other surveillance technologies have become more accessible and efficient.
- Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
- Main idea: Social media and mobile apps have made it easier for the public to report crimes and share information with law enforcement.
- Supporting idea: This increased connectivity can lead to quicker apprehension of suspects and prevention of further crimes.
- Example: In 2018, the swift apprehension of the suspect in the Toronto van attack was facilitated by the public's use of social media to report the unfolding incident. Eyewitnesses shared photos and videos on platforms like Twitter and Facebook, enabling law enforcement to quickly identify and apprehend the perpetrator, preventing potential further harm.
- Main idea: Social media and mobile apps have made it easier for the public to report crimes and share information with law enforcement.
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
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