Phân tích"The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010"IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR)

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The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010

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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of women and men who passed their driving test in an Asian country between 1980 and 2010.

Overall, women consistently had higher pass rates than men throughout the period, with both groups showing a general upward trend in their success rates over time.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

In 1980, 48% of women passed their test, and this figure steadily increased over the next 30 years. By 1990, the pass rate for women had risen to 52%, and it peaked in 2000 at around 68%. However, a slight decline was observed by 2010, when the percentage of women passing dropped to 64%.

For men, the pass rate in 1980 was notably lower than that of women, at around 28%. This figure improved over time, reaching 38% in 1990 and 49% in 2000. In 2010, the percentage of men passing their driving test remained almost unchanged from the previous decade, at 50%.

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