Phân tích"The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in millions) of telephone calls in Finland, divided into three categories, from 1995 – 2004."IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Kèm bài sửa task response HS IELTS TUTOR)

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The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in millions) of telephone calls in Finland, divided into three categories, from 1995 – 2004.

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  • Overall:
    • While local landline calls remained the most popular option in 2004, the gap between the three categories had significantly narrowed during the latter half of the period under consideration
    • There was an increase in the number of minutes spent on mobile, national, and international landline calls, whereas the figure for local landline witnessed an increasing-then-decreasing trend.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
  • Body 1: Viết số liệu category tăng + giảm (Local - landline)
    • Local landline calls experienced the highest usage, starting at 12,000 million minutes in 1995, peaking at just under 17,000 million minutes in 2000, but reverting to the 1995 level by 2004 
  • Body 2: Viết số liệu category tăng (National and international - landline & Mobiles)
    • National & international - landline 
      • National and international landline calls showed steady growth, increasing from 6,000 million in 1995 to 10,500 million by the end of the period although the rate of growth slowed in the last two years.
    • Mobiles 
      • Mobile calls saw a remarkable surge, going from 250 in 1995 to 9,800 million minutes in 2004. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
      • This substantial increase was particularly notable between 2000 and 2004 when mobile phone usage tripled.

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