Phân tích "The chart below shows the number of people employed in five types of work in one region of australia in 2001 and 2008" IELTS WRITING TASK 1

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The chart below shows the number of people employed in five types of work in one region of australia in 2001 and 2008

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  • Overall:
    • Overall, the number of employees increased in most sectors over the period, with the most significant growth observed in Sales and Nursing, while Farming experienced a decline.
  • Body 1: Viết về số liệu tăng 
    • In 2001, Sales had the highest number of employees, with around 1.8 million, which further increased to nearly 2 million by 2008. 
    • Computing also saw a rise, from approximately 800,000 employees in 2001 to 1.2 million in 2008. >> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR  
    • Similarly, Nursing experienced growth, with the number of employees increasing from 200,000 to 400,000.
  • Body 2: Viết về số liệu giảm
    • Conversely, the Accounting sector saw a minor decrease from 1 million in 2001 to about 900,000 in 2008. 
    • Farming experienced the most notable drop, with employment falling from 200,000 to 100,000 over the same period.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The bar chart illustrates the number of people employed in five types of work in a certain region in Australia in 2001 and 2008.

Overall, the number of employees increased in most sectors over the period, with the most significant growth observed in Sales and Nursing, while Farming experienced a decline.

In 2001, Sales had the highest number of employees, with around 1.8 million, which further increased to nearly 2 million by 2008. Computing also saw a rise, from approximately 800,000 employees in 2001 to 1.2 million in 2008. Similarly, Nursing experienced growth, with the number of employees increasing from 200,000 to 400,000.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)

Conversely, the Accounting sector saw a minor decrease from 1 million in 2001 to about 900,000 in 2008. Farming experienced the most notable drop, with employment falling from 200,000 to 100,000 over the same period.

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