Phân tích"The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time"IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Computer-based 18/05/2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time"IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Computer-based 18/05/2022)

The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time.

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  • Overall: 
    • Full time education was favoured much more by both the sexes than part-time one Cách dùng danh từ "favour" tiếng anh
    • An ascending trend was seen in figures for females in both full and part time education enrolment.
  • Body 1: Viết về 1970/71 & 1980/81 
    • Viết về Full-time:
      • In the 1970s, around 1000 men were recorded as studying full time, the figure for females on the other hand was less by 300. Cách dùng động từ "record" tiếng anh
      • The next decade saw a rise in the female number, reaching 800, and the figure for the male enrolment dropped down to 800. 
    • Viết về Part-time:
      • In 1970, around 100 males and 40 females studied part time, and in 1980, the numbers were approximately 150 and 190 respectively.Cách dùng & paraphrase "respectively"/ "respective" 
  • Body 2: Biểu đồ 1990/91 
    • The last decade in the graph marks a rise for all categories. 
    • Male numbers for full time and part time education rose to 880 and 200 respectively. 
    • The female enrolment in full time also increased dramatically further this decade and stood at 1100, whereas the part time data recorded was the same as the figure for males >>  Bên cạnh, IELTS TUTOR cũng cung cấp thêm PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
  • Hoặc có thể chia theo bố cục:
    • Body 1: Male 
    • Body 2: Female

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