Phân tích "The chart below compares the percentage of time Australian mothers and fathers spent helping their children with four activities in 2013 " IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi 17/12/2022)

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The chart below compares the percentage of time Australian mothers and fathers spent helping their children with four activities in 2013

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  • Overall:
    • Mothers attended more frequently than fathers in all pursuits. 
    • While parents together spent the highest proportion on having fun with their children, fathers liked to help young people with their assignments, and preparing clothes was mothers’ favourite preserve.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  CÁCH PARAPHRASE TỪ "SPEND" TIẾNG ANH
  • Body 1: Viết về Dressing + Homework 

    • In dressing, mothers accounted for 75% of the time, whereas fathers contributed a mere 2%. Both parents together participated in 50% of the cases.

    • Regarding homework, mothers' involvement was 60%, fathers’ was 10%, and both parents together shared 38%.

  • Body 2: Viết về Playing games + Preparing for bed

    • Playing games saw the highest joint effort, with both parents at 70%. Mothers spent 25% of the time, while fathers contributed 5%.

    • For preparing for bed, mothers again led with 42%, fathers at 5%, and both parents together at 48%.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of time Australian mothers and fathers spent helping their children with four activities in 2013.

Overall, mothers spent significantly more time than fathers assisting with dressing and preparing for bed, while both parents spent considerable time on homework and playing games together. Fathers consistently contributed the least time in all activities.

In dressing, mothers accounted for 75% of the time, whereas fathers contributed a mere 2%. Both parents together participated in 50% of the cases. Regarding homework, mothers' involvement was 60%, fathers’ was 10%, and both parents together shared 38%.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Playing games saw the highest joint effort, with both parents at 70%. Mothers spent 25% of the time, while fathers contributed 5%. For preparing for bed, mothers again led with 42%, fathers at 5%, and both parents together at 48%.

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