Phân tích "The best way to prevent people from smoking is to impose high taxes on tobacco products. In this way, people will be less likely to develop a long-term addiction to smoking. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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The best way to prevent people from smoking is to impose high taxes on tobacco products. In this way, people will be less likely to develop a long-term addiction to smoking. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Imposing high taxes on tobacco products may discourage people from smoking by increasing the cost of purchasing cigarettes.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase "prevent" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: This could be an effective way to reduce the number of people who take up smoking and prevent the development of long-term addiction to smoking. 
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: The revenue generated from these taxes could also be used to fund public health initiatives that discourage smoking and promote healthier lifestyles.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Many countries have implemented a tobacco tax that has resulted in significant revenue generation.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "implement" tiếng anh
        • This can be an effective way to discourage smoking and encourage people to adopt healthy behaviors.
      • Example: 
        • For instance, in 2019, the US government collected approximately $12 billion in revenue from federal cigarette excise taxes alone. 
        • For example, a portion of the tobacco tax revenue in the US is used to fund the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention's (CDC) Office on Smoking and Health, which supports programs aimed at reducing tobacco use and promoting healthier lifestyles. 

Theo hướng Partly (Vừa ủng hộ ý này, vừa ủng hộ ý kia) có thể tham khảo cách triển khai:

• Intro câu 2: Trong khi ý này cũng đúng, ý kia cũng có lý (while high taxes on tobacco products may be an effective way to prevent people from smoking, it may not be a comprehensive solution to the complex issue of addiction to smoking)
  • Body 2: On the other hand, Viết về ý”The best way to prevent people from smoking is to impose high taxes on tobacco products”
    • Main idea 1: Imposing high taxes on tobacco products may discourage people from smoking by increasing the cost of purchasing cigarettes.
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: The revenue generated from these taxes could also be used to fund public health initiatives that discourage smoking and promote healthier lifestyles.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "generate" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 
  • Body 1: On the one hand, Viết về ý”it may not be a comprehensive solution to the complex issue of addiction to smoking”
    • Main idea 1: Some people may continue to smoke despite the high taxes on tobacco products, as addiction to smoking is a complex issue that is not solely dependent on the cost of cigarettes.
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: High taxes may disproportionately affect low-income individuals who are more likely to smoke, leading to issues of economic inequality.
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 

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