Phân tích"The best way to improve family life is to make fathers and mothers take courses regarding parents and child development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (ĐỀ THI 13/12/2023 & 28/4/2024)

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI TASK 1 VIẾT THƯ NGÀY 05/7/2020"you are going to take a holiday and your friend agrees to stay at your house. Write a letter to him for"IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa HS đạt 6.0 đi thi thật), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The best way to improve family life is to make fathers and mothers take courses regarding parents and child development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (ĐỀ THI 13/12/2023 & 28/4/2024)

The best way to improve family life is to make fathers and mothers take courses regarding parents and child development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Parenting courses can provide new parents with valuable insights, strategies, and techniques for raising their children effectively.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • These courses often cover a wide range of topics, including child development, communication skills, discipline approaches, and problem-solving methods. 
        • For individuals who have little prior experience with childcare or feel uncertain about parenting, these courses can offer a structured learning environment that boosts their confidence and equips them with practical skills.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: A study published in the journal "Parenting" found that parents who took a parenting course were more likely to use positive parenting techniques, such as praise and encouragement, than parents who did not take a course.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: It provides a platform for building a supportive community and exchanging experiences. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Parenting can often be isolating, especially for first-time parents who might feel overwhelmed by the challenges of raising a child. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
        • Parenting courses offer a space where parents can connect with others who are going through similar experiences, fostering a sense of belonging and shared understanding.
      • Example: A study published in the journal "Parenting" found that parents who participated in a parenting course were more likely to feel supported by other parents than parents who did not participate in a course.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Improving family life through mandatory parenting and child development courses for parents is a topic of growing interest. I totally agree with this approach as it can provide valuable insights and foster supportive communities.

Firstly, parenting courses can equip new parents with essential knowledge and skills for raising their children effectively. These courses cover a wide range of topics, including child development, communication skills, discipline strategies, and problem-solving methods. For individuals who lack prior experience in childcare or feel uncertain about their parenting abilities, these courses offer a structured learning environment that boosts their confidence and provides practical skills. For example, a study published in the journal "Parenting" found that parents who took a parenting course were more likely to use positive parenting techniques, such as praise and encouragement, compared to those who did not take such courses.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)

Secondly, parenting courses provide a platform for building a supportive community and exchanging experiences. Parenting can be isolating, especially for first-time parents who may feel overwhelmed by the challenges of raising a child. These courses create a space where parents can connect with others facing similar experiences, fostering a sense of belonging and shared understanding. This communal support can significantly alleviate the stress and loneliness often associated with parenting. For instance, the same study in "Parenting" reported that parents who participated in a parenting course were more likely to feel supported by other parents than those who did not participate.

In conclusion, mandatory parenting courses can profoundly improve family life by providing essential parenting skills and fostering supportive communities among parents.

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