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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The bar chart shows the number of hours worked by men & women per week in Australia in 2007"IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 8/1/2023)
I. Đề bài
The bar chart shows the number of hours worked by men & women per week in Australia in 2007.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Overall:
- The working hours of citizens ranged widely from 0 to over 80 hours per week, with the most common range being 30 to 50 hours for both genders.
- Body 1: Viết về men
- Approximately 43% of men worked between 30 and 50 hours per week, the highest percentage among the five groups, followed by exactly 30% in the 60-80 hour category.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
- The percentages for the 10-20 hour and over 80 hour groups were notably lower, around 12% and 10% respectively.
- Only 5% of the total male population worked fewer than 10 hours per week.
- Body 2: Females
- 35% worked 30-50 hours per week, ranking first among all duration groups, while the 10-20 hour sector was considerably smaller, comprising approximately 23%.
- There was a slight difference between the 60-80 hour and 0-10 hour categories, with the former slightly higher at about 18% compared to the latter's 15%.
- Unlike other sectors, only a tenth of Australian women worked more than 80 hours per week, indicating a minority preference for such long hours.
- Overall:
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