Phân tích"The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010"IELTS WRITING TASK 1

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010"IELTS WRITING TASK 1

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Bài này nếu phân tích theo hướng phân tích tách riêng Males & Females có thể bố cục như sau: 
  • Overall:
    • Women exercised more than men, with the exception of those aged 15-24 (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: a higher percentage of women than men exercised regularly in every age group except the youngest)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng "with the exception of" tiếng anh
    • Boys aged 15 to 24 and women aged 45 to 54 accounted for the highest percentage of the total people who did regular exercise  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Middle aged females were the most physically active, proportionally while males aged 35 to 44 did the least physical activity HOẶC: while women’s participation was highest in the 45-54 age bracket, that of men peaked among 15- to 24-year-olds)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "exclusion" tiếng anh
  • Body 1: Viết về Độ tuổi 15-44 
    • The 15 to 24 age group was the only group in which the proportion of males taking regular exercise was higher than that of females, 52% and 47.7% respectively.
    • 48.9% women at the age between 25 and 34 exercised on a regular basis, whereas the figure for the opposite sex in the same age group was only 42.2%.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cấu trúc SO SÁNH trong IELTS Writing Task 1
  • Body 2: Viết về Các độ tuổi còn lại 
    • Over 50% of women aged 35 to 64 exercised regularly while the figures for men in the same age groups were much lower, ranging from 39.5% to 45.1%.
    • Men and women aged 65 or older who did regular physical activity accounted for a similar percentage, at around 47%.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cụm giới từ (preposition phrase) tiếng anh

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