Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much." IELTS WRITING TASK 1.
I. Đề bài
The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
III. Phân tích
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- Overall:
- Breakfast is the healthiest meal of the day as it contains the least amount of these three ingredients, whereas dinner is the unhealthiest meal of the day. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Breakfast is the healthiest meal, which contains the least amount of salt, oil and sugar)
- There is a considerable amount of sodium and saturated fat in dinners while added sugar is most prevalent in snacks. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: snack contains the highest proportion of added sugar amongst the four examined meals HOẶC: while the levels of sodium and saturated fat in dinner are the highest, the opposite is true for breakfast)
- Body 1: Viết về Sodium + Saturated fat
- Sodium has the highest proportion in dinner, with 43%, three times higher than snacks and breakfast (nêu số liệu) (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Dinner and lunch have the largest proportions of both sodium (43% for dinner and 29% for lunch) and saturated fat (37% for dinner and 26% for lunch))
- The average percentage of saturated fats in snack is 21%, slightly higher than that in breakfast, at 16%. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng Figure / percentage / proportion
- Body 2: Viết về Added sugar
- A considerable disparity can be seen in the figures for snack and breakfast, with 42% for the former and only 16% for the latter. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng THE FORMER - THE LATTER
- The figures for added sugar in an average meal for dinner and lunch are 23% and 19% respectively.
- Overall:
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