Phân tích"The advocates of international aid believe that countries have a moral obligation to help each other, while the opponents consider it unnecessary, because money is misspent by the governments that receive it. Discuss these two points of view and give your opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The advocates of international aid believe that countries have a moral obligation to help each other, while the opponents consider it unnecessary, because money is misspent by the governments that receive it. Discuss these two points of view and give your opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 2

The advocates of international aid believe that countries have a moral obligation to help each other, while the opponents consider it unnecessary, because money is misspent by the governments that receive it. Discuss these two points of view and give your opinion

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm countries have a moral obligation to help each other,
• • • Main idea 1: Advocates often highlight the humanitarian aspect of international aid, emphasizing the potential to save lives, alleviate suffering, and contribute to the overall well-being of individuals in less fortunate countries.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • One of the primary humanitarian motivations for international aid is the opportunity to save lives. 
        • Aid can provide critical resources such as food, clean water, and medical supplies to populations facing immediate threats to their health and well-being, especially in the aftermath of natural disasters, conflicts, or health crises.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: Emergency relief after natural disasters: Following the devastating earthquake in Nepal in 2015, international aid provided medical care, food, and shelter to millions of displaced people, preventing countless deaths and alleviating immense suffering.
    • Main idea 2: By providing aid, wealthier nations contribute to global stability. 
      • Supporting idea: Addressing issues such as poverty and inequality can help prevent social unrest, conflicts, and the potential for mass migrations.
      • Example: The Inter-American Development Bank's focus on poverty reduction, education, and infrastructure development in Latin America has helped curb inequality and social unrest, fostering stability and reducing the flow of migration towards wealthier nations.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm the opponents consider it unnecessary, because money is misspent by the governments that receive it. & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Corruption, lack of transparency, and inefficiencies in aid distribution can undermine the intended impact of assistance.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Corruption can lead to the diversion of aid funds for personal gain or for purposes other than those intended. 
        • Money meant for critical projects or services may be siphoned off, diminishing the effectiveness of the aid.
      • Example: Billions of dollars in aid poured into Afghanistan after the US invasion were plagued by corruption, with funds siphoned off by warlords, officials, and contractors. This led to unfinished projects, ineffective services, and widespread disillusionment with international assistance.
    • Main idea 2: Perpetual reliance on aid can create a dependency mindset, hindering the development of self-sustaining economies in recipient countries. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
      • Supporting idea: This may perpetuate a cycle of dependence rather than fostering long-term growth.
      • Example:  Over a decade of subsidies for cotton farmers in Mali from Western countries made them dependent on this market, neglecting diversification and hindering development of other sectors. When subsidies were reduced, the cotton industry collapsed, leaving many farmers in a vulnerable position.

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