Bên cạnh PHƯƠNG PHÁP HỌC IELTS WRITING HIỆU QUẢ VỚI IELTSTUTOR, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn thêm Phân tích & sửa essay về"Some people focus on news in their country while others think it is more important to be aware of international news" IELTS WRITING TASK 2
I. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Từ vựng & ideas topic "news/newspaper"(báo chí) IELTS
II. Đề bài
Some people focus on news in their country while others think it is more important to be aware of international news. Discuss both views and give your opinion
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
Với dạng discuss both views & give your opinion essay có thể phân bố 2 đoạn thân bài như sau:
- Intro: ủng hộ nên focus on news in their country
- Body 1 trả lời view 2 Others think it is more important to be aware of international news
- Main idea 1: Following international news can keep people up-to-date with information about global environmental issues
- Supporting idea 1: provides people with up-to-the-minute reports about the harmful effects of climate change. Therefore, they would realize the urgency of the current environmental situation, thereby taking actions to improve it.
- Main idea 2: Watching international news is certainly very helpful when it comes to making an informed decision about going abroad
- Main idea 1: Following international news can keep people up-to-date with information about global environmental issues
- Body 2: trả lời view 1 Some people focus on news in their country (nêu rõ ủng hộ quan điểm này)
- Main idea 1: By paying much attention to news about our own countries, we can understand our national situation better.
- Main idea 2: being aware of that news is important to readers’ livelihood.
- Supporting idea 2: News about business regulations for entrepreneurs also applies, since it is usually in their best interests to operate within the law.
- Example 2: A good example is news about taxes; as taxes directly affect the income of the vast majority of people, knowing this information can help them to plan their finances in advance.
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