Giải đề"Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?" IELTS WRITING (Đề thi 14/9/2023 - kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR)

Bên cạnh Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi), IELTS TUTOR Giải đề"Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?" IELTS WRITING

Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Lưu ý đối với dạng bài có từ MUST là từ chỉ tuyệt đối hoá cần đọc kĩ và thường sẽ theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE vì must mang tính bắt buộc và tuyệt đối hoá, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE với quan điểm đề cho có thể bố cục như sau:
• Body 1: nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE với quan điểm “Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead”
  • Main idea 1: Các công trình kiến trúc thu hút du lịch từ đó làm tăng ngân sách quốc gia  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt: Museums that house ancient artefacts could host special exhibitions to attract a significant number of tourists, and subsequently generate a sizable income)
    • Supporting idea 1: các công trình kiến trúc là nơi thu hút du lịch vì chứa đựng giá trị tinh thần  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt: Art has greatly contributed to our cultural growth, which betters the understanding of our heritage and fills the gap between different generations)
    • Example 1: The Cave of Altamira serves as a UNESCO World Heritage Site, showcasing prehistoric cave paintings and engravings dating back between 11,000 and 51,000 years, offering invaluable insights into the lives and beliefs of our ancient ancestors while bridging generations through the enduring power of art.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)

• Body 2: nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE với quan điểm đề cho 
  • Main idea 2: Art nói chung giúp con người giải toả stress  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt Quality of life could be vastly enhanced through the performing arts such as music and theatre due to their entertainment value)
    • Supporting idea 2: 
      • They are incredible outlets for people to release stress by allowing them to escape the harsh realities of life. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • Consequently, our emotional and mental health would be fully nourished, which could be just as crucial as looking after our physical well-being.
    • Example 2: A study by the National Endowment for the Arts found that young people who participate in the arts are more likely to graduate from high school and to go on to college. They are also more likely to be employed and to have higher incomes.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

In this day and age, increasing attention has been placed on the debate over whether the government should allocate funding to the arts or devote the entire budget to public services. From my perspective, both the arts and public services bring different benefits to society, and therefore, government investment in both is desirable.

On the one hand, it is important to note that art is the voice of society. Funding the arts encourages public expression and the development and pursuit of new ideas. Art has always served as a window to the past, linking today’s generation with previous ones, and helps to vividly create new narratives. For example, European governments continue to fund museums and exhibits in their countries, despite many being unable to operate on a commercial basis. These institutions can still afford to preserve their heritage and culture.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

On the other hand, spending the budget on public services provides more immediate benefits to the population and directly impacts the country’s sustainable growth. This can be seen in Vietnam, where many schools and hospitals in rural areas require substantial financial support to renovate and purchase facilities, along with establishing transport systems connecting these places to residential areas. Therefore, reducing art funding to focus on public services is essential.

To conclude, while ensuring sufficient investment in public services is crucial, I contend that withdrawing capital from cultural and creative sectors is unwise, considering the economic and social value the arts can add to a nation.

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