Phân tích & sửa đề "The maps show the transformation of the village of Eastminster over a ten-year period"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích & sửa đề "The maps show the transformation of the village of Eastminster over a ten-year period"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

The maps show the transformation of the village of Eastminster over a ten-year period.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Overall: 
  • It is clear that this town experienced a significant transformation regarding residential, commercial and industrial developments throughout the period given
  • The area south of the river experienced greater changes.
• Body 1: viết map 1: 
  • Map chia đều ra thành 2 phần khá đồng đều (In 1999, Eastminister was a small town, which was bisected into almost equal parts by the river)
  • Phía dưới sông:
    • There were streets of houses, public garden, shops, school and hospitals along the railway line 
  • Phía trên sông: 
    • The four major establishments to the North of the river were the Park, large houses with gardens & the woodland   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn   Cách dùng danh từ "establishment" tiếng anh
• Body 2: viết map 2
  • Phía dưới sông:
    • The construction of factories and warehouses along the railway line 
    • To the east, the streets of houses were demolished to make way for blocks of flats. 
    • The conversion of the school on the river into a new shopping complex.
    • The expansion of the hospital west of the old-school situated on the river.
  • Phía trên sông: 
    • More houses were also built encroaching on the park in the northeast. 
    • The large house with gardens had been replaced with a hotel and a golf course
    • The woodland in the northwest was turned into an adventure park. 

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