Phân tích & sửa đề "People believe that individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful" IELTS WRITING

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People believe that individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful. Others say that those who contribute to society like scientists, teacher are the most successful. Discuss both and give your opinion?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Với dạng đề discuss both views nếu theo hướng ủng hộ quan điểm số 1 "individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful" thì có thể bố cục 2 đoạn thân bài như sau: 
  • Body 1: Quan điểm "those who contribute to society like scientists, teacher are the most successful" được người ta ủng hộ vì các lí do sau: 
    • Main idea: the services and contributions of these people are considered invaluable in the society and can be hardly measured in terms of money. 
    • Supporting idea: Teachers show the light of knowledge and create the base of the success of any person in the society. Similarly, scientists benefit the society by innovations which are either critical like the vaccine inventions or progressive like 5G technology.
    • Example: renowned scientists throughout history are often not extremely wealthy, yet they are considered great successes due to their contributions and the personal joy they derive from the full exercise of their abilities. 
  • Body 1: Quan điểm (và nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này) individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful vì các lí do sau: 
    • Main idea 1: Business magnates have changed the course of human history through their brainchildren
      • Supporting idea: Their products have helped make the booming virtual economy we know today 
      • Example: Inventing Google has made Larry Page a billionaire, and Google has undoubtedly provided means and platforms to usher modern education into a new era.
    • Main idea 2: Wealth allows an individual to enjoy their life to the fullest, and this financial freedom can be viewed as the strictest and more direct definition of success.
      • Supporting idea:  The wealthy can afford the possessions and lifestyle they desire and also have the free time and peace of mind to completely enjoy their leisure
      • Example: 

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