Phân tích"Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Cách học IELTS READING hiệu quả, IELTS TUTOR Phân tích"Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

Thực ra bài này hơi khó với học sinh Việt Nam do ở VN thì đường sắt không giống với nước ngoài lắm, có thể search thêm trains ở Úc hoặc là MRT ở Sing để hiểu thêm nhé. Ở VN, đường sắt thường ít sử dụng, nhưng ở các nước phát triển thì người ta chủ yếu là dùng đường sắt như phương tiện di chuyển hằng ngày, di chuyển bằng train nó sẽ có những mặt lợi sau:

• Các tuyến đường sắt thì thường sẽ kết nối cả thành phố. Khác với xe buýt thích hợp với di chuyển gần, thì đi train ở nước ngoài nó sẽ phù hợp với những người muốn đi xa và thường đi train như vậy sẽ nhanh hơn so với đi xe buýt. Thường những người ở xa người ta xe bắt train đi tới 1 trạm train khác, sau đó người ta mới bắt tiếp xe buýt để đi đến một điểm người ta muốn tới, chứ đi xe buýt cho đoạn đường xa sẽ rất lâu 
• Ở mấy train hoặc MRT người ta còn mang theo cả xe đạp để tới trạm train kế tiếp rồi thì mang theo xe đạp có sẵn đạp tới chỗ người ta cần đến luôn 

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:Khi viết bài này có thể chia bố cục như sau:

• Totally agree 
  • Body 1: Di chuyển bằng trains sẽ nhanh và tiện lợi hơn khi kết nối cả thành phố dễ dàng hơn là di chuyển bằng bus
    • Main idea: Extending the railway system to cover larger areas of a city significantly aids in alleviating the issue of traffic congestion on the roads. (hoặc: travelling by train saves time for the passengers since they are faster than cars and buses)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic "train/railway" IELTS 
    • Supporting idea: 

      • The extension of the railway system allows for an efficient and reliable mode of transportation that can carry a large number of passengers.

      • This reduces the reliance on individual vehicles and helps to reduce traffic congestion on the roads.

      • Trains have dedicated tracks and can operate independently of road traffic, further contributing to smoother and more efficient transportation.

    • Example: The Los Angeles Metro Rail is a light rail system that has been expanding in recent years. The expansion of the Metro Rail has helped to reduce traffic congestion in many parts of the city.
  • Body 2: Train environment-friendly hơn 
    • Main idea: Most modern trains are operated by electricity; thus, they do not cause pollution in comparison to motor vehicles (hoặc: Unlike cars or buses they do not emit poisonous gases which pollute the air)>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Sửa bài IELTS SPEAKING PART 1-2-3 topic Work/Study(Sửa & Làm lại 4 lần - HS đạt 7.5)
    • Supporting idea:
      • Electric trains do not produce tailpipe emissions like cars that run on gasoline or diesel. 
      • They rely on electricity generated from various sources, including renewable energy, which makes them much cleaner and more environmentally friendly. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "generate" tiếng anh
      • By using electric trains, we can help reduce air pollution and mitigate the negative effects of transportation on climate change.
    • Example: The Eurostar is a high-speed train service that connects London to Paris, Brussels, and Amsterdam. The Eurostar is powered by electricity, and it does not emit any pollutants into the atmosphere. This makes it a much cleaner form of transportation than cars, buses, or airplanes.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

Theo hướng Partly (Vừa ủng hộ ý này, vừa ủng hộ ý kia) có thể tham khảo cách triển khai:

• Intro câu 2: Trong khi ý này cũng đúng, ý kia cũng có lý (In my view, I partially agree with the statement that governments should invest in railways, but it should be balanced with the development and maintenance of road infrastructure)
• Body 1: On the one hand, viết ủng hộ quan điểm 1”governments should invest in railways”
  • Main idea 1: Extending the railway system to cover larger areas of a city significantly aids in alleviating the issue of traffic congestion on the roads. (hoặc: travelling by train saves time for the passengers since they are faster than cars and buses)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic "train/railway" IELTS 
    • Supporting idea: 
      • The extension of the railway system allows for an efficient and reliable mode of transportation that can carry a large number of passengers.
      • This reduces the reliance on individual vehicles and helps to reduce traffic congestion on the roads.
      • Trains have dedicated tracks and can operate independently of road traffic, further contributing to smoother and more efficient transportation.
    • Example: The Los Angeles Metro Rail is a light rail system that has been expanding in recent years. The expansion of the Metro Rail has helped to reduce traffic congestion in many parts of the city.
  • Main idea 2: Most modern trains are operated by electricity; thus, they do not cause pollution in comparison to motor vehicles (hoặc: Unlike cars or buses they do not emit poisonous gases which pollute the air)>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Sửa bài IELTS SPEAKING PART 1-2-3 topic Work/Study(Sửa & Làm lại 4 lần - HS đạt 7.5)
    • Supporting idea:
      • Electric trains do not produce tailpipe emissions like cars that run on gasoline or diesel. 
      • They rely on electricity generated from various sources, including renewable energy, which makes them much cleaner and more environmentally friendly. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "generate" tiếng anh
      • By using electric trains, we can help reduce air pollution and mitigate the negative effects of transportation on climate change.
  • Body 2: On the one hand, viết về ý số 2”it should be balanced with the development and maintenance of road infrastructure”
    • Main idea 1: Roads serve as vital arteries that enable access to various regions, including rural and isolated communities. 
      • Supporting idea: Investments in road networks are essential for economic development, emergency services, and daily commuting needs
      • Example: 
        • The Trans-Canada Highway, which connects all of Canada's provinces and territories.
        • The Pan-American Highway, which is a network of roads that stretches from Alaska to Argentina.
        • The Great North Road, which is a road in Kenya that connects the capital city, Nairobi, to the port city of Mombasa.
    • Main idea 2: Neglecting road infrastructure could hinder accessibility and limit opportunities for growth, especially in areas where railways may not be feasible or cost-effective.
      • Supporting idea: In remote or rural regions with lower population densities, constructing and maintaining railway networks may not be economically viable.
      • Example: Due to the low population density and cost constraints, the Navajo Nation faces challenges in establishing a railway network. As a result, the limited road infrastructure hinders mobility for residents and businesses, affecting access to essential services and hindering transportation of goods.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ"population"tiếng anh

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The debate over whether governments should allocate funds to railways instead of roads is complex, as both types of infrastructure offer significant benefits. In my view, I partially agree with the statement that governments should invest in railways, but it should be balanced with the development and maintenance of road infrastructure.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

On the one hand, extending the railway system to cover larger areas significantly aids in alleviating traffic congestion on the roads. The expansion of rail networks, such as the Los Angeles Metro Rail, provides an efficient and reliable mode of transportation capable of carrying large numbers of passengers. This reduces reliance on individual vehicles and helps mitigate road congestion. Additionally, most modern trains are operated by electricity, making them a cleaner alternative to cars and buses. Electric trains do not produce tailpipe emissions, relying instead on electricity generated from various sources, including renewables, which reduces air pollution and mitigates the impact of transportation on climate change.

On the other hand, road infrastructure remains crucial for connecting various regions, particularly rural and isolated communities. Investments in road networks are essential for economic development, emergency services, and daily commuting needs. For example, the Trans-Canada Highway and the Pan-American Highway are vital routes that connect diverse regions and support economic activities. Moreover, neglecting road infrastructure could hinder accessibility and limit growth opportunities, especially in areas where railways are not feasible or cost-effective. In remote or rural regions with lower population densities, such as the Navajo Nation, constructing and maintaining railway networks may not be economically viable, making road infrastructure critical for mobility and access to essential services.

In conclusion, while investment in railways offers significant benefits in terms of efficiency and environmental impact, it is equally important to maintain and develop road infrastructure to ensure comprehensive and balanced transportation networks.

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