Phân tích "Sports (Olympics) help to a greater extent to build peace in world. Do you agree or disagree? Give some examples and include relevant experiences in your response." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Sports (Olympics) help to a greater extent to build peace in world. Do you agree or disagree? Give some examples and include relevant experiences in your response." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Sports (Olympics) help to a greater extent to build peace in world. Do you agree or disagree? Give some examples and include relevant experiences in your response.

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: The Olympics provide a platform for nations to come together and engage in friendly competition, fostering mutual understanding and cultural exchanges. 
      • Supporting idea: Athletes from different countries interact, build relationships, and promote dialogue, which can contribute to reducing tensions and promoting peace.
      • Example: 
        • The Olympic Games are a great example of how athletes from different countries can interact, build relationships, and promote dialogue. The games bring together athletes from all over the world to compete in a variety of sports. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "promote"
        • The FIFA World Cup is another major sporting event that brings together athletes from different countries. The World Cup is held every four years, and it is one of the most watched sporting events in the world. The tournament provides an opportunity for athletes from all over the world to meet and compete on a level playing field. 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: The process of hosting and participating in the Olympics often requires international cooperation, leading to collaborations between nations in areas such as infrastructure development, security, and sports administration. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "development" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: These interactions can contribute to diplomatic relations and promote dialogue on shared interests beyond the sporting event itself.
      • Example: 
        • The 2008 Olympic Games in Beijing were also a major undertaking that required extensive international cooperation. The games involved the construction of new sporting venues, the improvement of existing infrastructure, and the provision of security for athletes and spectators.
        • The 2020 Olympic Games in Tokyo were also a major undertaking that required extensive international cooperation. The games were postponed due to the COVID-19 pandemic, but they still required the cooperation of many different countries.

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