Phân tích "Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that there are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that there are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that there are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm”Some people think it is important spending a lot of money on family celebrations such as birthday and weddings”
    • Main idea 1: They want to flaunt their wealth.
      • Supporting idea: Weddings and events are a good platform to show off their designer clothes, jewellery and makeup.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Giải thích phrasal verb: show off
      • Example: 
        • In 2018, Priyanka Chopra and Nick Jonas' opulent wedding in Jodhpur, India, estimated at over $20 million and attended by global celebrities, featured custom-made designer attire and millions of dollars in jewelry. 
        • The media's extensive coverage and viral photos of the extravagant event made it a symbol of the couple's affluence and societal status.

    • Main idea 2: People these days organise such functions to grab attention on social media in the form of likes and comments.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Social media platforms often provide instant gratification through likes, comments, and shares. 
        • Organizing events with the intent of showcasing them on social media allows individuals to seek validation and recognition from their online peers.
      • Example: In 2019, an Indian couple's viral $1 million wedding was a testament to their desire to impress their social media followers, featuring extravagant details across the venue, food, entertainment, and professional photography and videography capturing every moment.
    • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý main idea khác:
      • Main idea: Marriage is once in a lifetime event; therefore, people spend lavishly to make it a special and memorable moment.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase "expensive" IELTS SPEAKING & WRITING
      • Supporting idea: These weddings bring all family members, friends and relatives at one place, so they can get an opportunity to spend some quality time together with lots of fun and enjoyment.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm”others think it is waste of money” & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: leads to a financial burden on the host family  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: a tradition of grand marriages puts a burden on the people who are not affluent financially)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • There have been several instances of people taking personal loans just to impress the society.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: People not only spend their lifelong savings on these weddings but also borrow lofty loans just to impress the society)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "instance" tiếng anh
      • Example: In 2019, an Indian couple's desire for a lavish wedding led them to take a $200,000 personal loan, resulting in financial strain, reduced basic expenses, and postponed life plans like home buying and starting a family.
    • Main idea 2: creates a sense of competition among the relatives to organise a better celebration for their loved ones.
      • Supporting idea: Seeing one relative host a lavish celebration can trigger a desire to outdo or match that event, as individuals often engage in social comparison to assess their own achievements and status.

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