Phân tích "Some scientists think it is very soon that computers will be more intelligent than human. Some people think it is a positive development, while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích và sửa chi tiết đề thi IELTS SPEAKING 4/8/2020 [Audio+Transcript], IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some scientists think it is very soon that computers will be more intelligent than human. Some people think it is a positive development, while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some scientists think it is very soon that computers will be more intelligent than human. Some people think it is a positive development, while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people think it is a positive development
    • Main idea 1: Highly intelligent computers could swiftly tackle complex issues, from medical diagnoses to climate modeling, revolutionizing our ability to solve critical problems.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn Cách dùng trạng từ "quickly" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Highly intelligent computers possess immense processing power and speed, allowing them to analyze vast amounts of data and complex patterns quickly. 
        • This capability enables them to process medical data or climate data in a fraction of the time it would take a human.
      • Example: For example, a computer could be trained to identify patterns in medical images that are invisible to the human eye. This could lead to earlier diagnosis and treatment of diseases, which could save lives.
    • Main idea 2: Automation driven by highly intelligent machines could eliminate mundane tasks, allowing humans to focus on more creative, strategic, and value-driven endeavors.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn Cách dùng động từ "use"tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Mundane tasks, such as data entry, sorting, or basic calculations, can be effectively delegated to machines. 
        • This delegation reduces the cognitive load on humans and allows them to focus on tasks that require higher-level thinking.
      • Example: Chatbots are being used to answer customer questions and resolve issues. This frees up human customer service representatives to focus on more complex tasks such as handling complaints and providing personalized service.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm others think it is a negative development & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: The rise of intelligent machines might lead to job displacement on a large scale, creating economic disparities and unemployment for individuals whose roles can be automated.
      • Supporting idea:  
        • Highly intelligent machines have the capability to perform tasks more efficiently and accurately than humans. 
        • As a result, jobs that involve repetitive and routine tasks, such as data entry, assembly line work, or basic customer service, are susceptible to automation.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: Self-driving trucks are being developed, and they are likely to replace many truck drivers in the coming years.
    • Main idea 2: As computers become more intelligent, there is a fear that humans might lose control over them, leading to scenarios where machines make autonomous decisions without human oversight.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Highly intelligent machines have the capacity to learn from data, adapt to new situations, and make decisions based on their learning. 
        • This autonomy can lead to situations where machines operate without explicit human instructions.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • Example: AI is being used to make decisions about patient care, such as diagnosing diseases and recommending treatment plans. This raises the concern that these decisions could be biased or inaccurate, leading to harm to patients.

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