Phân tích"Some say that parents whose children are breaking the law must be punished in some way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Thi giấy 21/4/2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some say that parents whose children are breaking the law must be punished in some way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Thi giấy 21/4/2022)

Some say that parents whose children are breaking the law must be punished in some way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE 
    • Main idea: an ideal upbringing of a child is the duty of a parent  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: After bringing a baby into this world, parents have the responsibility to mould them into law-abiding citizens HOẶC: parents play the pivotal role in molding the psyche of young children)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • This can only be achieved by equipping minors with moral values, enabling them to know what can be done or what should not be done   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  TỪ VỰNG & IDEAS TOPIC CRIME IELTS
        • if a child is unruly or ill-mannered, commonly the parents are thought of as not being able to discipline the child
        • The root cause of their problem is that they do not receive sufficient moral education from their parents, and consequently they cannot distinguish the right from wrong  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: As a minor, they do not have the ability to learn moral values by themselves)
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE 
    • Main idea:  if these irresponsible adults do not receive punishment which can effectively force them to fulfill their parental responsibility, their children will continue committing crimes (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: These juveniles are more likely to commit crimes in future, so it is necessary to penalize these adults to avoid these problems.)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Crime, a crime hay Crimes và cách dùng trong tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Repeat offending may harm innocent people and pose a threat to social security
        • Studies have shown that most young children who commit crimes have been abused in some way by their parents  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase từ CRIME tiếng anh
      • Example: 
        • Serial killers are an extreme but useful case in point. Nearly every serial killer begins antisocial behaviour from a young age, including the criminal torture of animals. 
        • There are also no known examples of serial killers coming from happy homes; they are all the product of varying degrees of abuse from their parents.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng & Word form của "crime"

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