Phân tích"Some people think watching TV and films makes children more creative. Others think that it can actually lower their creativity. Discuss both views and give your opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 23/08/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people think watching TV and films makes children more creative. Others think that it can actually lower their creativity. Discuss both views and give your opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 23/08/2023)

Some people think watching TV and films makes children more creative. Others think that it can actually lower their creativity. Discuss both views and give your opinion

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people think watching TV and films makes children more creative.
    • Main idea 1: Watching TV and films exposes children to a wide array of narratives, characters, and scenarios. 
      • Supporting idea: This exposure can stimulate their imagination and encourage them to think outside the box.
      • Example: In the United States, a young boy watches a movie depicting a group of friends embarking on an adventure, which introduces him to the concepts of teamwork and friendship, emphasizing the significance of having dependable companions.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Main idea 2: Visual storytelling can inspire children to think visually, encouraging them to create their own visual representations of ideas and stories.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Visual storytelling engages both sight and often sound, making the experience more immersive. 
        • This multisensory engagement can inspire children to explore creating their own visual and auditory components.
      • Example: "The Magic School Bus" is a well-known children's book series that employs visual storytelling through vibrant illustrations to impart scientific concepts, allowing children to vividly visualize the various described scientific phenomena.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Others think that it can actually lower their creativity & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Excessive screen time may lead to less time for activities that encourage active creativity, such as drawing, storytelling, building, or playing imaginative games.
      • Supporting idea: Excessive screen time might reduce opportunities for children to engage in group activities, collaborate, and bounce creative ideas off each other.
      • Example: A child devoting extensive daily hours to watching TV or playing video games might find fewer opportunities for engaging in activities like drawing, storytelling, or block building, which demand active participation and imaginative thinking, qualities that could be hindered by constant exposure to passive forms of entertainment.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
    • Main idea 2: Frequent exposure to fast-paced visuals in TV shows and films may contribute to shorter attention spans, which can hinder sustained creative exploration.
      • Supporting idea: Excessive exposure to fast-paced visuals and quick scene changes in TV shows and movies can condition children's brains to seek constant novelty, potentially reducing their ability to focus on a single task for an extended period.

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