Phân tích "Some people think the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others think that the main benefits are in the world business. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 05/06/2023, 6/4/2024 & 11/7/2024)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others think that the main benefits are in the world business. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 05/06/2023)

Some people think the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others think that the main benefits are in the world business. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm  Some people think the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment
    • Main idea: Global issues like climate change, deforestation, and pollution transcend national boundaries and require collaborative efforts to address effectively. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Through international cooperation, countries can share knowledge, resources, and technologies to tackle these environmental challenges together. 
        • This approach fosters a sense of collective responsibility and promotes sustainable practices on a global scale. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ"responsibility"tiếng anh 
      • Example: One example of global collaboration to address climate change is the Paris Agreement, which was signed by nearly all countries in 2015. This agreement aims to limit global warming by reducing greenhouse gas emissions and promoting sustainable development worldwide. 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm others think that the main benefits are in the world business & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea: Cooperation between countries enhances trade relations, stimulates economic growth, and opens up new markets. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ"stimulate"tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Collaborative agreements, such as free trade agreements or economic alliances, facilitate the flow of goods, services, and investments across borders, creating opportunities for businesses to expand and thrive. 
        • This economic cooperation can lead to job creation, increased productivity, and higher living standards for participating countries.
      • Example: 
        • The European Union (EU) is an economic and political union of 27 member states in Europe that aims to promote peace, stability, and prosperity.
        • Economic cooperation within the EU has established a single market with the free movement of goods, services, capital, and labor, resulting in increased trade and investment opportunities, leading to job creation and economic growth.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

International cooperation is a crucial aspect of our interconnected world, with some arguing that its main advantage lies in environmental protection, while others believe it is more significant in world business. I agree with the latter view.

On the one hand, supporters of the environmental perspective highlight that global issues like climate change, deforestation, and pollution transcend national boundaries and require collaborative efforts to address effectively. Through international cooperation, countries can share knowledge, resources, and technologies to tackle these environmental challenges together. This approach fosters a sense of collective responsibility and promotes sustainable practices on a global scale. For instance, the Paris Agreement, signed by nearly all countries in 2015, aims to limit global warming by reducing greenhouse gas emissions and promoting sustainable development worldwide.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

On the other hand, proponents of the business perspective, myself included, argue that international cooperation enhances trade relations, stimulates economic growth, and opens up new markets. Collaborative agreements, such as free trade agreements or economic alliances, facilitate the flow of goods, services, and investments across borders, creating opportunities for businesses to expand and thrive. This economic cooperation can lead to job creation, increased productivity, and higher living standards for participating countries. The European Union (EU) exemplifies this, as its economic cooperation has established a single market with free movement of goods, services, capital, and labor, resulting in increased trade and investment opportunities, job creation, and economic growth.

In conclusion, while environmental protection is essential, the benefits of international cooperation in world business are more significant due to their direct impact on economic growth and societal well-being.

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