Phân tích"Some people think the governments should act to decide how people live in order to have a healthier life. Others think individuals should decide their own lifestyle. Discuss both views and give your opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 23/5/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think the governments should act to decide how people live in order to have a healthier life. Others think individuals should decide their own lifestyle. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 23/5/2023)

Some people think the governments should act to decide how people live in order to have a healthier life. Others think individuals should decide their own lifestyle. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people think the governments should act to decide how people live in order to have a healthier life. 
    • Main idea 1: Government intervention is necessary to address public health issues and prevent chronic diseases. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ"prevent"tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • They believe that policies such as imposing taxes on unhealthy foods, implementing restrictions on advertising of junk food, and promoting physical activity can effectively encourage healthier lifestyles. 
        • By shaping the environment and creating incentives for healthier choices, governments can protect the well-being of their citizens and reduce the burden on healthcare systems.
      • Example:  For instance, Mexico implemented a sugar tax in 2014, resulting in a significant decrease in the consumption of sugary drinks and an increase in the consumption of water and healthier beverages. 
    • Main idea 2: Governments have access to comprehensive data and scientific research, allowing them to make informed decisions about what constitutes a healthy lifestyle. 
      • Supporting idea: They believe that by intervening in areas such as food production, advertising, and public spaces, governments can create an environment that facilitates healthier choices and reduces the prevalence of diseases related to poor lifestyle habits.
      • Example: For instance, many countries have introduced legislation to restrict smoking in public places, raise taxes on tobacco products, and implement graphic warning labels on cigarette packages. These policy decisions are supported by scientific evidence that highlights the detrimental effects of smoking on individual health and the broader societal impact.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Others think individuals should decide their own lifestyle & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Personal freedom and the right to make choices about one's own lifestyle should be respected. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng tính từ"respected"tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Government interference in personal decisions infringes upon individual liberties and can lead to a paternalistic approach. 
        • Education and access to information about healthy living should be provided, but the ultimate decision should rest with individuals. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "decision" tiếng anh 
      • Example: Many individuals choose to adopt specific dietary practices based on personal beliefs, cultural values, or health considerations. Vegetarianism and veganism, for example, involve abstaining from consuming animal products for various reasons, such as ethical concerns, environmental sustainability, or health benefits.
    • Main idea 2: Each person has unique needs and circumstances that may not be adequately addressed by a one-size-fits-all approach dictated by the government. 
      • Supporting idea: Individuals are best positioned to understand their own bodies, preferences, and well-being, and should be able to make informed choices based on their own judgment.
      • Example: For instance, individuals with chronic medical conditions or disabilities may require tailored approaches to manage their health effectively. A government-imposed approach that disregards individual differences may not adequately address these specific needs.

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