Phân tích"Some people think that work is the most important thing in people's lives. Without a successful career, life would be meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Kèm bài sửa)

Bên cạnh Phân tích "Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?" IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that work is the most important thing in people's lives. Without a successful career, life would be meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Some people think that work is the most important thing in people's lives. Without a successful career, life would be meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • There are more desirable goals rather than a successful career to attain in our life
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: There are other people who do not enter the workforce but seem satisfied with their lives   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "invite" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: Some stay-at-home mothers can totally feel satisfied provided that their children are well-behaved and achieve good grades at school
      • Example: Take Japan as a telling example; men are often the breadwinners while women stay at home, take over the responsibilities related to household chores and childcare, which make them feel content as a well-established tradition.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: What makes a person feel fulfilled is practically personal preferences   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "join" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: To assess whether a person finds his or her life meaningful actually depends on their core values, which varies from one individual to another.
      • Example: Two individuals may find fulfillment in entirely different ways—one by advancing their career and the other by volunteering—demonstrating that what makes life meaningful is shaped by personal preferences and core values, which vary from person to person.
  • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý idea khác:
    • Main idea: A vast majority of people perceive a meaningful life as helping others living in poor and underprivileged conditions.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ"competition"tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea: They spend most of their lifetime devoting to charity work. 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

While some argue that a successful career is essential for a meaningful life, I totally disagree with this viewpoint. There are more desirable goals in life than simply achieving professional success.

One reason I disagree is that many people who do not enter the workforce still find great satisfaction in their lives. For example, stay-at-home mothers can feel completely fulfilled when their children are well-behaved and achieve good grades at school. In Japan, it is common for men to be the breadwinners while women stay at home, taking on responsibilities related to household chores and childcare. This well-established tradition brings them contentment, illustrating that a meaningful life does not necessarily depend on a successful career.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Moreover, what makes a person feel fulfilled largely depends on personal preferences. Assessing whether someone finds their life meaningful actually hinges on their core values, which vary greatly among individuals. For instance, two people may find fulfillment in entirely different ways—one through advancing their career, and the other through volunteering. This demonstrates that the meaning of life is subjective and shaped by individual preferences and values.

In conclusion, while a successful career may be important for some, it is not the only path to a meaningful life, as personal fulfillment is determined by individual choices and values.

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