Phân tích"Some people think that too much attention and too many resources are given to the protection of wild animal and birds. Do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 27/7/2022 & 9/6/2024)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people think that too much attention and too many resources are given to the protection of wild animal and birds. Do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 27/7/2022 & 9/6/2024)

Some people think that too much attention and too many resources are given to the protection of wild animal and birds. Do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Human activities negatively affect wildlife
      • Supporting idea: 
        • The natural habitat of these animals and birds are intruded very frequently nowadays for poaching, exploitation of wild resources and for illegal encroachments.
        • The world is advancing faster than ever before, and this naturally has a huge impact on the environment >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt cách dùng impact như động từ & danh từ 
      • Example: The Amur leopard, native to Russia and China, faces habitat loss and poaching due to logging, development, and illegal hunting, leading to a dwindling population of around 84 adults, disrupting ecosystems and biodiversity. Conservation efforts, such as establishing protected areas, anti-poaching patrols, and community outreach, offer hope for the future of these magnificent cats and emphasize the importance of preserving wildlife and habitats for generations to come.

        
        

         
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: resources spent on wildlife protection are still limited.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • It is widely believed that wild animal and bird conservation is only of minor importance, and human welfare is far more of a priority >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng HUMAN và HUMANS tiếng anh
        • This is why governments are not willing to allocate a large number of funds and resources to the conservation of wild animals, which makes it difficult for organisations that are actually trying to make a difference.
      • Example: in Vietnam, we do not see any long-lasting bird conservation campaigns due to a lack of funding from the government, and it is non-governmental organizations that currently raise the funds to take care of existing wild birds >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng tính từ "existing"

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

There is a prevailing debate on whether wildlife protection is a significant concern given the rapid advancement of human activities. I totally disagree with the notion that protecting wild animals and birds is of minor importance.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)

Firstly, human activities severely impact wildlife. The natural habitats of many animals and birds are increasingly encroached upon for poaching, exploitation of resources, and illegal settlements. This intrusion leads to habitat destruction and puts wildlife at significant risk. For example, the Amur leopard, native to Russia and China, suffers from habitat loss and poaching due to logging, development, and illegal hunting. This has reduced its population to around 84 adults, threatening ecosystems and biodiversity. Conservation efforts, such as protected areas, anti-poaching patrols, and community outreach, emphasize the critical need to preserve wildlife and habitats for future generations.

Secondly, the resources dedicated to wildlife protection remain limited. Many believe that human welfare takes precedence over animal conservation, leading governments to prioritize funding towards human-related issues. Consequently, wildlife protection receives minimal financial support, hindering the efforts of organizations striving to make a difference. In Vietnam, for instance, there are no long-lasting bird conservation campaigns due to insufficient government funding. Non-governmental organizations must raise funds to care for existing wild birds, showcasing the financial challenges faced in wildlife conservation.

In conclusion, the detrimental impact of human activities on wildlife and the insufficient resources allocated for their protection highlight the importance of prioritizing conservation efforts. Ignoring these issues would lead to irreversible damage to biodiversity and ecosystems.

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