Phân tích"Some people think that they are responsible for their happines. Others feel that happiness depends on other factors in their life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 13/5/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people think that they are responsible for their happines. Others feel that happiness depends on other factors in their life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 13/5/2023)

Some people think that they are responsible for their happines. Others feel that happiness depends on other factors in their life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Others feel that happiness depends on other factors in their life. 
    • Main idea: Happiness is largely dependent on external factors such as income, social status, and relationships.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "outside" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: They believe that people who are financially stable, have a supportive social network, and live in a safe and prosperous environment are more likely to experience happiness. 
      • Example: 
        • For instance, people who live in a country with a high standard of living, good healthcare, and low levels of crime tend to report higher levels of happiness.
        • For instance, a study conducted by the University of Warwick found that doubling one's income increased happiness by only about 0.2 points on a 10-point scale, indicating that income does play a role in happiness, but it is not the sole determinant.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people think that they are responsible for their happines.  & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: One's outlook and behavior have a direct impact on their happiness.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • People who maintain a positive mindset and take actions that align with their values and goals are more likely to experience happiness.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase từ"be closer to nature"tiếng anh
        • Even in challenging circumstances, individuals can choose to adopt a positive mindset and find meaning and joy in their lives.
      • Example: For example, individuals who practice gratitude, engage in hobbies they enjoy, and cultivate strong relationships with loved ones tend to be happier than those who do not.
    • Main idea 2: Individuals also have a responsibility to work towards their own happiness.
      • Supporting idea: By taking actions such as setting goals, practicing self-care, and cultivating positive relationships, people can increase their chances of experiencing happiness.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "regulate" tiếng anh
      • Example:  
        • For instance, if someone sets a goal to learn a new skill, such as playing an instrument or speaking a new language, and then achieves that goal, it can lead to a sense of accomplishment and satisfaction that can boost their mood and well-being.
        • For instance, someone who regularly takes the time to exercise and eat a healthy diet may have more energy and feel more confident, which can contribute to overall happiness.

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