Giải đề"Some people think that the detailed criminal description on newspapers and TV has bad influences, so this kind of information should be restricted in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề 28/5/2024)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that the detailed criminal description on newspapers and TV has bad influences, so this kind of information should be restricted in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people think that the detailed criminal description on newspapers and TV has bad influences, so this kind of information should be restricted in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.

• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: It encourages viewers to violate the laws (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: those criminal descriptions wield adverse influence on audience, especially fragile youngsters)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Numerous teenagers tend to follow or replicate infractions presented with detailed procedures, methods and tools mainly because they have great curiosity or they want to make a grand impression by proving that they can be better than the person who committed the original crime. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "procedure" tiếng anh
        • Due to vulnerable mentality and lack of ample experience, upon contacting violent programmes, those kids are tempted to follow suit, thus breaking the law and such juvenile delinquencies are too often to be ignored. 
        • If this trend is out of control, then more teenagers will fall victim to those evil reports.
      • Example: In 2017, a 13-year-old boy in Ohio, driven by curiosity and a desire to impress his friends, was arrested for attempting to create a homemade bomb after meticulously following a detailed YouTube tutorial, highlighting the dangerous influence such content can have on impressionable young minds before authorities fortunately intervened.

  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: numerous would-be criminals can learn skills of committing crimes from similar cases, also the police find it more formidable to crack down on crimes efficiently.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Although the original purpose of crime description is to warn people against offenses and teach them valuable lessons, the fact is that there, indeed, exists a discrepancy between what is desired and what is achieved. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "indeed" 
      • Example: The "Son of Sam" murders in New York City during the late 1970s provide a prime example. David Berkowitz, the serial killer responsible for these murders, gained notoriety through sensationalized media coverage. Some believe the detailed descriptions of his crimes and methods may have inspired copycat killings. Furthermore, the intense media focus made it challenging for law enforcement to gather information and identify Berkowitz.

         

         

• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Broadcasting more violations of crimes in combination with their severe punishment plays a pivotal role in eradicating the intention of future offenders >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "broadcast" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: The increasing rate of the number of to-be-culprits would be significantly reduced
      • Example: In China, capital punishment is a legal penalty for some serious crimes like murder, drug trafficking, and terrorism. The sentences are often carried out publicly and broadcasted through state media outlets. This approach aims to deter potential criminals by showcasing the severe consequences of such actions.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: They would have a tendency to prepare for approaches to avoid being victims of wrongdoings. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "report" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: By exemplifying in detail the procedure of a breach, individuals would be more well-aware of the feasibility of a criminal case.
      • Example: In 2021, a major ransomware attack crippled Colonial Pipeline, a vital fuel pipeline in the United States. The attack disrupted fuel supplies and caused widespread panic. However, many smaller businesses also face similar cyberattacks, often leaving victims unsure of how to report the crime or what steps to take.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The detailed depiction of criminal activities in newspapers and on television has sparked a debate regarding its potential negative influences. I totally agree that such information should be restricted in the media due to its detrimental effects on viewers, particularly vulnerable youths, and the way it aids potential criminals.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

One major reason to support the restriction of detailed criminal descriptions is that they can encourage viewers, especially impressionable youngsters, to violate the law. Teenagers, driven by curiosity and the desire to make an impression, might replicate crimes they see detailed in the media. Their vulnerable mentality and lack of experience make them susceptible to such influences. For example, in 2017, a 13-year-old boy in Ohio was arrested for attempting to create a homemade bomb after following a detailed tutorial he found online. This incident underscores how exposure to explicit crime-related content can lead to juvenile delinquency, which can become rampant if left unchecked.

Another reason is that detailed descriptions of crimes can serve as a manual for would-be criminals, complicating efforts by law enforcement to combat crime efficiently. Although the intention behind crime reporting is often to warn the public and educate them on avoiding similar situations, it can have the opposite effect. For instance, during the late 1970s, the "Son of Sam" murders in New York City received extensive media coverage. The detailed accounts of David Berkowitz's crimes potentially inspired copycat killings and hindered the police's ability to gather information and apprehend him quickly. This example highlights the unintended consequences of detailed crime reporting, which can inadvertently assist criminals in honing their methods.

In conclusion, the restriction of detailed criminal descriptions in the media is necessary to prevent the encouragement of illegal activities among young viewers and to hinder the education of potential criminals.

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