Phân tích"Some people think that shops should not be allowed to sell food or drinks that are scientifically proven to be bad for people's health. Do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR) (Đề thi 11/8/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people think that shops should not be allowed to sell food or drinks that are scientifically proven to be bad for people's health. Do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Some people think that shops should not be allowed to sell food or drinks that are scientifically proven to be bad for people's health. Do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: It aligns with public health concerns and promotes responsible consumer choices.
      • Supporting idea:  
        • Regular overconsumption of food and drink high in calories, sugar and fat can lead to weight gain and, over time, obesity, which in turn has a significant impact on health and wellbeing and increases the risk of obesity related diseases   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic"Natural Resources"IELTS
        • By curbing the availability of unhealthy products, individuals might be less inclined to consume them, thus potentially reducing the prevalence of health issues like obesity, diabetes, and heart disease.
      • Example: 
        • A study published in the journal "Obesity" found that a 10% increase in the price of sugary drinks was associated with a 10% decrease in their consumption.
        • Another study, published in the journal "Health Affairs", found that a tax on sugary drinks in Mexico led to a 12% decrease in their consumption.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Force businesses not to produce unhealthy foods (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý có thể viết ý khác: not to market unhealthy food to consumers)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • The food industry plays a major role in the obesity epidemic
        • Responsible companies must commit to ending the flood of unhealthy food and support their customers to eat healthier by ensuring healthy choices are available, accessible and affordable for all.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng & Ideas topic "Throwaway society" IELTS
      • Example: 
        • A study published in the journal "Nature" found that exposure to unhealthy food marketing is associated with increased consumption of unhealthy foods and weight gain.

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