🔥Phân tích "Some people think that robots are very important to humans future development while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi 20/9/2023 & 28/12/2024 )

Bên cạnh Phân tích và sửa chi tiết đề thi IELTS SPEAKING 4/8/2020 [Audio+Transcript], IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that robots are very important to humans future development while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi 20/9/2023 )

Some people think that robots are very important to humans future development while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society. 
    • Main idea: The delegation of various mechanical tasks to robots is likely to give rise to greater unemployment figures.
    • Supporting idea:  In the workplace, especially in manufacturing, millions of workers worldwide, particularly unskilled ones, would lose their jobs to cutting-edge robotic systems.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt: Currently, large numbers of manual workers are being replaced by cutting-edge robotics systems in numerous factories around the world)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic "Work" IELTS 
    • Example: 
      • For example, fully automated processes have already taken over monotonous jobs such as assembly-line workers or bank tellers in many developed countries such as the United States.
      • For instance, thousands of Chinese assembly workers at FoxConn, a major manufacturer of Apple products, have recently been made redundant after the company adopted a fully automated process that minimizes the need for a skilled and unskilled human labor supply.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic "Study" IELTS
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people think that robots are very important to humans future developmen & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: At work, there are a range of responsibilities being carried out by humans that could be done by robots ranging from the transportation of goods and photocopying to slightly more robust tasks such as data input and security.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "role" tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea:  
      • They can be very accurate – to fractions of an inch
      • Robots can work in environments which are unsafe for humans – in the nuclear or chemical industries for example
      • As artificial intelligence becomes more self-sufficient it is likely that companies will be able to increase efficiency and humans can prioritise the areas where they most excel  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng & word form của "responsible"
    • Main idea 2: In homes, robots may be able to take over chores such as washing the dishing and cleaning, freeing up individuals to focus on more pleasurable pastimes.
      • Supporting idea: Automated robots can complete chores much faster and efficiently than humans, allowing individuals to reclaim precious time for leisure, hobbies, or spending quality time with family and friends.
      • Example: Automated vacuum cleaners are a great example of how robots can complete chores faster and more efficiently than humans. Instead of manually vacuuming your floors, you can simply program your robot vacuum cleaner to do it for you. This can free up your time so that you can focus on other things, such as spending time with your loved ones, pursuing your hobbies, or simply relaxing.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The use of robots has sparked considerable debate regarding their potential impact on human life. While some argue that robots pose significant risks to society, others believe they are indispensable for future development. This essay will discuss both perspectives and explain why I firmly support the latter view.

On one hand, critics argue that robots could have detrimental effects on society, particularly in the job market. The delegation of numerous mechanical tasks to robots is likely to give rise to higher unemployment rates. For example, in the manufacturing sector, millions of unskilled workers risk losing their jobs to cutting-edge robotic systems. Fully automated processes have already replaced monotonous jobs such as assembly-line workers or bank tellers in many developed nations. A notable instance is FoxConn, a major manufacturer of Apple products, which recently made thousands of employees redundant after implementing a fully automated production process. Such developments highlight the adverse economic consequences that could stem from the overreliance on robotic technology.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

On the other hand, proponents contend that robots play a pivotal role in enhancing human development, a view I strongly support. In the workplace, robots can undertake a variety of tasks ranging from simple responsibilities like transporting goods to more complex duties such as data input and security. Their precision and ability to operate in hazardous environments, such as nuclear or chemical industries, are unmatched by humans. Furthermore, as artificial intelligence becomes more self-sufficient, companies can improve efficiency, enabling humans to focus on areas where they excel. Similarly, in domestic settings, robots can handle chores like cleaning and dishwashing, allowing individuals to allocate more time to fulfilling activities. For instance, automated vacuum cleaners efficiently handle floor cleaning, freeing people to spend time on hobbies or with loved ones.

In conclusion, while robots may pose challenges such as unemployment, their advantages in improving efficiency and quality of life far outweigh these concerns.

Vocabulary:

1. Detrimental: Gây hại, bất lợi.

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The overuse of social media can have detrimental effects on mental health.
   • Dịch: Việc lạm dụng mạng xã hội có thể gây hại cho sức khỏe tinh thần.

2. Give rise to: Gây ra, dẫn đến.

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Climate change could give rise to severe weather patterns.
   • Dịch: Biến đổi khí hậu có thể dẫn đến các kiểu thời tiết khắc nghiệt.

3. Cutting-edge: Tiên tiến, hiện đại nhất.

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The company invests heavily in cutting-edge technology to stay competitive.
   • Dịch: Công ty đầu tư mạnh vào công nghệ tiên tiến để duy trì sức cạnh tranh.

4. Made redundant: Sa thải (do không cần thiết nữa).

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Many workers were made redundant when the factory closed.
   • Dịch: Nhiều công nhân bị sa thải khi nhà máy đóng cửa.

5. Precision: Sự chính xác.

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Surgical robots are known for their exceptional precision.
   • Dịch: Các robot phẫu thuật nổi tiếng với độ chính xác vượt trội.

6. Hazardous: Nguy hiểm, rủi ro.

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Working in a nuclear plant can be extremely hazardous.
   • Dịch: Làm việc trong nhà máy hạt nhân có thể cực kỳ nguy hiểm.

7. Excel: Xuất sắc, vượt trội.

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: She excels in mathematics and science.
   • Dịch: Cô ấy xuất sắc trong toán học và khoa học.

8. Fulfilling: Làm thỏa mãn, đáng hài lòng.

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Helping others can be a deeply fulfilling experience.
   • Dịch: Giúp đỡ người khác có thể là một trải nghiệm rất đáng hài lòng.

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