Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that parents should limit the hours their children spend watching TV and playing computer games and encourage them to read books instead. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING GENERAL TRAINING TASK 2
I. Đề bài
Some people think that parents should limit the hours their children spend watching TV and playing computer games and encourage them to read books instead. Do you agree or disagree?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
- Main idea: Books stimulate creativity and critical thinking, nurturing a child's imagination and expanding their understanding of the world.
- Supporting idea:
- They encourage a deeper level of engagement and active mental participation compared to passive screen activities.
- Reading enhances language skills, vocabulary, and comprehension, which are fundamental for academic success.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
- Example: One study, published in the journal Child Development in 2013, found that children who were read to by their parents for 15 minutes a day scored higher on tests of vocabulary, comprehension, and critical thinking than children who were not read to.
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea: Books stimulate creativity and critical thinking, nurturing a child's imagination and expanding their understanding of the world.
- Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
- Main idea: Reducing screen time also promotes healthier lifestyles, reducing the sedentary behavior often associated with excessive TV or gaming.
- Supporting idea: It encourages physical activity and face-to-face interactions, fostering social skills and emotional intelligence.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
- Example: One study, published in the journal Pediatrics in 2019, found that children who reduced their screen time by just one hour per day were more likely to be physically active and to have lower body mass indexes (BMIs). The study also found that these children were less likely to experience symptoms of depression and anxiety.
- Main idea: Reducing screen time also promotes healthier lifestyles, reducing the sedentary behavior often associated with excessive TV or gaming.
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
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